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This is definitely the best work I have ever written your support, I truly believe that with enough I can make it great, Seriously bleive when i say this will never be dropped until we all die...don't hold me to that i have a.d.d
Well one of the lively novel. Unique idea raising power to MC.Up to now this is more interesting .I want to see more chapters..........?????
The writing is good, the updates are consistent, the story development seems solid, the characters are original, and the background seems to be well thought out. Still, I'd enjoy seeing a bit more focus on the description of the setting and what the characters look like. To the author: Feel free to check out my original Avatar The Last Airbender spinoff "Avatar: Macai's Journey" if you would like.
Lots of POV switches and A/N. But, besides that, it is a good story so far. I really like the world and how you incorporate the power system.
Right so I'm redoing my review because the author couldn't take me disliking his work and deleted my review XD Anyways the novel is an average work with nothing special going for it. It's a typical novel with an added edginess to it. The author set up the story pretty well in the first chapter and I'm sure this is how a lot of people got hocked but after that its a slow ride down typical cliches I've seen many a time.If you want something to read quickly as junk food while you wait for other novel's to update this isn't half bad for the purpose.
Honestly the story is well written in comparison to many others out there but the Author should really work on his depiction of the main character's character as well as habits and train of thoughts. The way he handles issues is off-putting to say the least. His thought process is irrational and dumb and he tends to make seemingly "smart" choices but in depth investigation shows that his choices are actually rather stupid and don't seem progressive. He takes constant loses in dealings and is honestly a character without an ounce of spleen. He can be said to be somewhat of a sycophant and this is till chapter 70 as thats where I reached before nearly puking blood from the frustratiion the mc is causing me. Other than the main character I have loved everything about the novel so far. I highly appreciate the author and would like to encourage him to keep putting out chapters but to also work on this mc's character cause it really prevents people from reading the book when his character is this off putting in the beginning.
honestly it was one of best in starting bcoz of its unique mc with good humour , being logical , no simpness and dark type mc above that who really understands importance of k owledge . It was honestly good novel in starting but gstarted going downhill like many ither chinese novel bcoz of many same reason as others like illogical crap , firced wrting , forced situations to make mc hype more ,and then that forced romance shit honestly .from the the moment romance shit i mean Fmc was introduced he stopped being the mche was in starting . became a total simp . and many things started get illogical honestly . many things are forced justifyied also . It us a story for ppl who foolow blindly any shit aithors put , and any shit mc does. and yeah those Ship lover also will like this crap .
Well, expect a lot of s*x and jaw dropping circumstances. Whatever you read, just let it stay here and don't try imitating the MC outside. you'll just get yourself in jail ?
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Barely read 40 chapters, and I felt so sick.. every characters seems has no brain.. no logic applied here, not worth it. just wasting my timeso sad ?