I read the beginning chapters and the story has some potential but the grammar and sentence structure isn't very good. It's hard to read and doesn't make much sense. I was completely lost when he was describing how he ended up at the gang in the beginning
The book is decent but the main frustrating thing is the MC is subpar. He causes the reader to get frustrated because he repeatedly falls for simple traps. Over, and over, and over, and then over again. He knows what will happen in the future, he knows who the villains are, and when the invite him to leave the sect or offer him a "gift" he always accepts, falls for the trap, and ends up in a bad situation. This feels super forced.
At First I Really Liked This Novel But The More Chapter I Get The More Annoying It GetsThe FL Is Stupid For A Regressor I Mean She Gotta Be Powerful For Her To Call Herself An Empress In Her Last Life Bur She Doesn't Even Sweat To Show Her Talent To The World I Mean Showing Everyone That She's A Direct Descendant Of A Phoenix She Doesn't Even Suspect Someone Stronger Than Her Present Self Will Kill Her And Turn Her To A Pill And Etc. She Always Causes Trouble For The McNot Only That She Doesn't Even Know To Cover Her Tracks And She Keeps Acting Arrogant To Someone Stronger Than HerI Know She Has Her Pride From Her Last Life But Only Got Her Pride Not The Brain Of Her Last Life I Mean She Gotta Be Very Old In Her Last Life I Mean She Gotta Know That's She's Very Weak In Her Present Body But She Always Acts Arrogant And Never Even Considered To Hide Until She Is Powerful Enough To Act Arrogant Again She Doesn't Consider Her Decisions. The Mc Is Kinda Okay But He Always Doesn't Consider His Decisions I Mean Killing The Son Of A Superpowerful Persons Will Surely Not Attract Trouble I Mean He's Kinda Smart He Always Disguise Himself Berofe He Fights But He's Still Dumb He Doesn't Teach The FL The Consequences Of Her Actions. The Plot Is Basically The Son Of Heaven Has Bad Intention For The FL And FL Acts Arrogant Then The Son Of Heaven Hates The FL And Mc And Mc Sees From His Book I Think That The Son Of Heaven Hates Him And Wants To Kill The FL And The Mc Assinates The Son Of Heaven And The Mother Gets Angry And Wants To Kill The FL Because Her Son Is Dead And FL Is Still Alive And Not Also That The FL Got Out From A Tomb Runs Away Then She Bumps Into Son Of Heaven And The Son Of Heaven Wants Her To Be Concubine And The FL Arrogantly Rejects And Son Of Heaven Is Angry Wants To Eat The FL And Another Son Of Heaven Appeared Because He Followed The Tracks Of The FL They Fight One Died And He Wants FL To Be A Maid FL Rejects He Got Angry And Wants To Kill FL Mc Appears Almost Kill The Son Of Heaven And Then Experts 2 Realms Higher Than The Mc Appears And Then Mc Won Returns To The Sect But He Doesn't Know He Caused A War To Happen.The Is Good If You Ignore My Complaints
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A new book that will blow your socks off. I guarantee you. It's a reincarnation/transmigration fantasy book. The beginning is good, the story line is interesting, the characters are well written, the grammar is good too. Looking forward to more chapters.
Nice story so sad it ended at vol 1 hoping for the rest worst cliffhanger in my life ?
Into the Zombie World is a book of fiction written by Neil_Ads. The story revolves around a man named Nile who sought to survive a zombie apocalypse after his untimely death by being bumped by a truck. The author uses present-tense. Well, it is a good story. Personally, what I love about the book is Nile's intelligence and the way he reacts to certain things. He thinks logically, making the right choice except for the store as he could've looted the first three houses instead of choosing the store.I love his plans and schemes to get rid off or defeat zombies. I think there is a mixture of futuristic technology since there is this so called system that displays certain things. I'm not used to reading these kind of novel mixtures.Anyway, the grammar and punctuation is definitely one thing the author must improve. Yes, it uses present-tense but because of this, it seems more like a guy telling actions rather than a describing and story-telling. He is walking, He is going, he is banging, things like that should be changed.Because of this, it lacks emotions and some elements of a horror novel. You could describe the zombies more rather than using Big, small, fat, or sharp teeth. I didn't feel any suspense except for the parts in which the dialogues weren't aplenty. I would like to suggest that you describe things like this:Example:His leg were trembling. Try going to the next level:His legs were noodles. Or to add more suspense and frightening elements, I would suggest:Example: The silence shrouded his mind. (Lacks emotions)"Once the quietness arrived, it stayed and spread in Estha. It reached out of his head and enfolded him in its swampy arms…sent its stealthy, suckered tentacles inching along the insides of his skull, hoovering the knolls and dells of his memory, dislodging old sentences, whisking them off the tip of his tongue."Something like that. Well, I hope this honest criticism helped out!
I must say that what you did here is amazing I mean I have already watched the Teen wolf on Netflix and I'm reading this because I want to watch it again?. While reading this every scene comes in my mind of what happend I just love what you did here❤
Great a new novel as rizen as the main mc cant wait to read it hope it will be great because it is written by overlord venus bro............... ?????
Man, this book is amazing! It gave not one but two freaking chills by chapter 17! My gosh that freaked me out.Anyway, great book and idea.
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