AbdoNasser8115
Dropped?like never seeing the day of light again?
Finallyyyyyyyyy new chapters after a decade
Thank you for the praise coz all those screaming from excitement only got me scolded in our household ???HAHAHAHA
And yes, although I have already reread this before, I forgot the plot again so thank you for replying to my comment. I now feel the time has come to read this again?✨
My UPDATESSS
"It may just be the beginning, but I genuinely enjoy it. There's a common cliche, but that doesn't detract from its overall quality." Apologies for any grammatical mistakes; my command of a foreign language isn't perfect.
The story is progressing steadily, but at a slow pace. It promises intrigue eventually, but currently, if compressed, it would likely consist of around 50 chapters' worth of content. The issue I have is the excessive focus on minutiae, such as describing each monster's dissection, meal preparation, and eating habits in great detail. While initially intriguing, it becomes tedious when it's repeated without significant impact on the plot.
The main character (MC) is portrayed as overpowered from the start, which is fine as a starting point. However, this renders most action scenes predictable, as there's little tension outside of the MC trying to conceal their power. Combat scenes could be summarized more efficiently, mentioning only the defeated monsters and the MC's involvement.
Character development mainly revolves around skill improvement, with minimal emotional growth or meaningful interactions among the characters. Even the MC's relationships with the harem members are shallow, focusing on jealousy and attempts to gain attention. Skipping over four-fifths of the story wouldn't significantly affect the plot.
Overall, I've given the story a three, acknowledging that despite its length and occasional dull moments, it hasn't caused frustration. The experience is mild and enjoyable, with boring sections easily skimmed over.
It could just be me, but the atmosphere reminds me of the web novel "The Beloved Pet Fish of the Disabled Tyrant," often referred to as "danmei." The low rating isn't necessarily due to explicit content (people who enter knowing the premise and accept the plot developments, despite not being interested, shouldn't complain if it doesn't align with their preferences), but rather the execution. The story could have benefited from a smoother progression, showing character growth and moral dilemmas, instead of jumping straight into intense relationships. The lack of satisfying development is a letdown.
Yu Xiang's extreme luck throughout becomes monotonous, as she consistently prevails, defeating those who oppose her, even if they deserve it. While it has an in-story explanation, it becomes boring to witness her constant victories. As for characters like Yu Miaoqi, her one-dimensional nature or exaggerated vanity make her seem like a caricatured villain, serving as a stepping stone for the protagonist.
Overall, the story feels平淡 or underwhelming to me, despite occasional well-written scenes. My lukewarm response contributes to a lower rating compared to the average.
Tbh once he became a Sage the story basically ends he just does it again and again and again. Nothing in the story will be different.
I really love Xue Tian attitude lol
"Us" <<< our consisness
Hmm looks like there's going to be a long break huh. Hays, I was really looking forward for more
Im late by 6 months but, some things you must remove from their roots.
Do you support child relationships in novels? With older individuals?
I assume not.
Do you support intimate relationships , skin level and beyond, with their own family members? Even in novels or the like?
I hope not.
Some things shouldn't even be put as a novel , or fantasy, some things need to be removed and forgotten.
Alright, do you support a story about r**pe?
How about slavery?
Dark tragedy is there to enforce how bad some things are and remind us of the consequences.
Sugar coating it and making it shine like the sun and supporting it?
No.
My opinion, some may disagree.
