i love this story really interesting ?.
Definitely a nice novel. would recommend anyone trying it out. It already seems promising from the start.
Pertamax ??? Thanks for the Books!!!!! ? ??Oh, nobody have given a review for this yet? Let me be the first to give all five stars for all five categories for your new book ????? We are all looking forward for the next chapters ???
this is a dream come true for me! I've always wanted to read a book like this one. since I watched *the sandman*.
Please update this. The beginning is good. There is a lot of potential. Just keep going and don't give up. Let's gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!
awwwwn my poor dawnI wonder what happened to her mom though This book is going to be interesting I must say
The start of the novel is pretty confusing and a little hard to undersatnd but after a while things seem to become more clear, but that all i can say since there are only 3 chapter and i will come back when there are 20 or more chapter
Good book but I started reading at 12 chapters made and I’ve been waiting for 28 days
A very new concept and I can give 5 stars just for the uniqueness of this story. Character development is marvelous till the latest chapter and the mc is just perfect ?✨ and fmcs are also portrayed very beautifully and their possessiveness is also justified due to the world setting. I highly recommend everyone to at least give it a try and I guarantee you will be hooked.
Pretty interesting premise, though I’m not the greatest fan of the main character in the beginning… the switch-up in attitudes is a little too abrupt for my tastes, especially since he seems so ready to pull the trigger at any timeOverall, the novel is good and moving in an interesting direction. If you’re a typical web novel fan tho, the descriptions will feel long. If you’re a traditional novel fan, the descriptions will feel repetitive.I like seeing the author experiment with the writing style tho so I don’t mind. The style will take shape as he continues writing
If you guys wondering that I am using AI for writing this story then you aren't wrong. But, each and every idea, concepts, creativity, characters, plot, story developments, dialogues and direction are my own including the minor details like slow motion, dance of blood, etc. I am using AI just for language improvement and better usage of words to enhance the story. Just for better presentation. But I am not solely depended on AI. Instead sometimes I edit what AI has written, lol. In between there are many paragraphs written by me and not AI and this story is a blend of human creativity along the usage of AI to enhance the outcome and present a story for the new era. Conclusion: Language improvement by AI but story is not written by AI !! I said this now itself before people begin to criticize saying the story is written by AI and I got no creativity when the truth is I only improve the language and second reason, honesty is the best policy, :) I myself say this to new writers, do not completely use AI to write your story using AI's ideas and present them as your own, let there be your own creativity and use AI for enhancement of language, to get a blend of creativity for the new era, new generation. Keep everything together, a balance of everything, coz when there is balance, that's where things work. It's free advice! Take it or leave it. Next, Writing a review for my own story to get more engagement lol. I had been wondering for a while, the world is just so saturated and highly competitive that it feels frustrating that many people have the same idea and uniqueness is lacking. Even though you try your best to present something that might stand out and in the end you see your idea was already taken by someone else. But you still never give up until you reach that point where there is something that only you alone can think in this world and present it before someone else can. I hope every writer reaches that point and writes brilliant stories. Rest I wanted to say that..."I am... The Revolution!"
I love the world and system, the story is nteresting but it feels like the is not progressing much