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It’s a compelling read, nice work you’ve got.
This novel features a promising protagonist: a smart and calculating MC. What's disappointing is that the MC refuses to kill his five disciples. However, this doesn't mean he can't weaken them by severing some of their limbs or reducing their cultivation levels. It's too absurd for the MC to simply sever his relationship with his disciples then not owe each other anymore, especially after giving them everything and saving them from childhood tragedies. Considering his extensive experience with betrayal it doesn't make sense for him to let them go freely with fullbody even give them some kind of bodyguard.
10/10 would recommend was just awesome all I can use to describe it
This novel does not deliver what it promises. I was really excited at the prospect of multiple world line transmigration. But instead we got the regular old system that gives rewards for every unique monster killed. What was the point of meeting mage mc when all he get’s from him is 2 moves that in less then 10 chapters become mediocre. I was expecting his powers to develop through interacting with his other selves but now it’s just another system novel. I reas 75 chapters in total and there was no change to this so Im dropping it here.
I kid you not, the Mc has null likeable trait: Zero Empathy, selfish, self centered, lack of characterization, inconsistent, terrible self awareness.I have zero fondness for the MC as it stand, he is just so untolerable I hesitate to move forward. The girls's on the other hand, I guess they are more tolerable, but just not enough to motivate me.The flow of the prose is great however, that is the only partI can give 4 star.
Very interesting story. Good detailing of the world and descriptions of the characters are pleasant to read. Good luck author. thanks for the fantasy.
Aka One mans power. it had a different name back when it appeared in the pilot reads too, revoval of spirit qi im a loner or something. anyway decent read
Very good hostoriabme love the development that is having and more than anything I hope that it is not abandoned I see how incredible the story will be if it is not left abandoned for me is very well raised, I want the development until it stayed
Such a loving beautiful story....❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤Love, fright, nervousness , separation all emotions are well portrayed. I fell in love with ML and FL.??????????????????????????????
This book is really good so please keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon so I’ll be able to read and please don’t leave a cliffhanger??????????????????
Uhhhhhhh, MC just keeps his points and never uses themmmm, then he curses himself for not adding them and then does it againnnnnnnnn. Moreover he is extremely distrustful of his team for no reasonnnnnnn.
