Fantastic, this is actually written incredibly well, no Grammer errors and the author has a bigger vocabulary than me. I haven't laughed so hard reading a book in a long while, the author's humor is fantastic and I can't wait for more. But looks like there hasn't been an upload in 3months.
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NICE...........I AM STARTING TODAY BUT I ALREADY TAKE A LIKING TO IT..................................................KEEP IT UP UP BRO....
Finally, hope it's actually good .
Main character is smart,cunning and knows his limits then proceeds to push past them. Overall great but I don’t think It’ll be picked this time around.
Good work ,.....................................................................................................................................................
This Apocalyptic Novel is really Great. The MC mentality really show how a smart/witty/matured/responsible should do a proper preparation. Most of the Apocalyptic Novel which involves reincarnation usually have days or weeks of preparation only. But this novel have 3 Years to prepare which I find it really entertaining. I'm still at Chapter 13 in preparation of the Stronghold / Fortress of the MC and not yet in seen the taming part. So looking forward to it.
I barely read FL because some people tend to make the female weak and all about romance so I am glad you did not make her weak. There are some grammar mistakes and remember that periods and question marks go inside dialogue not outside of it. I like the characters interactions, it is lighthearted and fun. Your story is very insteresting and knows to keep a person reading. Keep up the good work!
140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140. I like it but hate that he told the truth to the girl at the beginning. Hope author would just later make mc spit some bs about how he was saying **** to ignore the girl.
A fast paced story that encapsulates many interesting sides of this mysterious world with a main character who has a pretty cool power that Isn't to over the top. Anyways can you get this novel out of trial, it's kind of fire, and I want more.
um author why does the plot changes in chapter 70 it's like one piece but you're a marine what happen to the game I mean. .. no offense but why did you change the plot I was so looking forward to the night forest but great story my man keep it up
This novel is really good, it's sheer quality makes me want even faster updates, anyways here's my review.Writing Quality - ★★★★★ I've read many novels here on the platform although I'm pretty new I can defintely say that your novels are one of the best in this platform, the quality of this novel in writing is amazing.Story Development - ★★★★★The development of your novel in my opinion is great, not too slow and not too fast. The MC isn't the strongest/OP right away but he gradually develops although not too slow which I like.Character Design - ★★★★★ Although the story hasn't finished exploring all the mysteries of the MC and his college life I can safely say that everything is consistent and good from the emotions shown to the mysteries that are yet to be revealed.Updating Stability - ★★★★Although the updates are fast, consistent and contain quality they are not the fastest on the platform. But don't take me wrong, the updates are consistent and have quality which matters over quantity.World Background - ★★★★VR game backgrounds are all alike/similar to each other but I frankly love what you did with the story, especially the mystery about the MC's life and who he really is, I'm looking forward to when that'll be revealed.