I recommend it....this novel is so ?i think Ainsley has charmed as well with her ability ho ho ho? This novel is very underrated....I'll share it with as many people as I can I've already added it in my reading list as well....please don't drop this novel author
Great Story. Characters were real and came to life. And I’ll bet a million bucks you would nevEr guess the eNding. If You d….Youre a genuus
I think that you should work on the characters backstory and make them more fleshed out and more real, the world building is great and keep updating
well put together so far good story and world setting is interesting, though I'm not a fan of AI so probably won't read anymore worthwhile to give it a try
Ahhh this I love it give me more especially the Mc I can already see this story becoming a very addict drug that I cant back away from please do not drop this
Please do not read this book.Not only is it repetitive and hellishly boring, UT is also full of derogatory language and may offend you. Also what has happened to this place.
To be honest, and I have to say, this is a good book. I am giving this story a 4.4 rating because one—I love the background; two—the plot is interesting and three— the actions scenes. This story had me going, truly. For example, I asked myself, why did that guy from the first three chapters, can't remember his name, had to give an innocent baby such a destructive power, and when the bullies finally got what was coming for them, I was like yes. Get them off your back Kai. The boy is literally just passing through life, which makes his future all the more promising. I am diffinitely adding this story to my library. Great job author.
This story progresses well, the only flaw which, I would say, needs improving was the author's writing quality. The author highlights the narrative with the use of many adjectives, this, in itself is fine, however these adjectives have not been used to their full capacity which in turn makes the read slightly cliche and annoying. This is aided with the use of 'pointing out the obvious'. For example, "it was a scene almost everyone had gotten used to as it happens quite often" - the reader already knows that it happening frequently is how everyone had gotten used to it, there is no need to clarify. The constant clarification and not leaving things to the reader's imagination takes the enjoyment and thrill out of reading such works of art, and thus makes them bored; and for the author, it is harder for them to create dramatic twists and turns in their plot. I would also suggest to go back and read through the grammar again to spot the small errors which need refining.I am aware that this may be a lot to take in for the author, and I do apologise if it is. The writing and plot were well, the author has potential, so please do not be disheartended, there were only very small corrections which need to be made.
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The plot develops well throughout the chapter and the picture created is admirable with an enjoyable storyline. As a reader i got sinked in this world the Author had created. A fascinating escape from reality into another world. A great read.waiting for new chapter ??
honestly from what Ive seen so far it seems like this system's main two goal are helping the user attain higher levels of power and help the user acquire the knowledge to recreate and probably improve the system otherwise there would be no reason to show anything more than the first video log
In the end the only reason im here was trying to search for touhou stuff but nope everything was a lie. Still r/lolice is dead, and Its been a few chapters and I don't understand anything. lets just give this 3 1/2 stars though cause that what the author rated.