Why did the update stop? Is this novel done?
did that bastard director from star wars write this novel, the amount of expectations subverted is infuriating
And now that I see you must've already got to know........so ima yeet
Ok anyone else slightly disturbed by how shallow and mercenary the fl seems to be? Whatever grevience she might have or suffered its all good the minute he hands her something expensive? Am I overreacting?
Great story and great characters. I loved every second I read! That is until I bought privilege.
The privilege chapters are basically copy pasted of previous chapters. Several copies of several chapters. The comment sections are full of people pointing it out with no effort made to fix it. The chapters get changed to the right content when they are in the 2 chapter privilege range to include the chapter titles. It leads me to believe the author has no privilege content available and is simply milking their readers.
please can you update this novel I like this kind of novels
Story for the first eleven chapters was pretty good. Minor grammatical errors aside, it was pretty solid.Story immediately fell off after chapter 12. Main character is revealed to be a busybody that will endanger his own life for someone he has never met before. Main character can literally practice martial arts and cultivate, but instead he gets into random street fights with gangsters while simping over some random girl. Before that fight happened, he paid for multiple meals of a girl from his class, costing a lot of his money. I find it astounding considering she probably makes more than he does. Also, I'm getting sick and tired of the love at first sight cliche, it's such a lazy way of having romance.World background is decent, nothing terrible, but nothing good either. I can't remember if they introduced the country or not. Overall, it was going good, but it's readily apparently the main character is not going to have any intelligence throughout the novel, and is going to kill himself trying to get a harem as fast as possible.
The title of the book is a lie. No way someone buys terrible food for 10 silver and then spends 10 Gold (=1,000 silver) to sell magic super food at 3 silver a piece for a single day would ever make it big.
Note: Updating Stability and World Background will be set to 5 stars since this is a review made when it was still a trial read.Writing Quality(4stars):It's pretty decent, haven't a lot of problems with itStory Development(4stars):Pretty good, I like the idea. The MC's phone cheat isn't uncommon, but I like how it's done. The plot is basically him raising a pet store, hopefully it stays that way unlike other pet store novels.Character Design(4stars):Characters aren't paper cut-outs, well at least from what I've read.
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petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................
Good book just not my cup of tea. I get irrationally irritated by MC gets system at perfect time. MC gets evaluation of the lowest order. MC is a crouching tiger in a field of sheep. MC will now hide and be bullied cause of said low evaluation. ahhh honestly it's because I like to predict what will happen next. Interesting premise though just not executed to my liking.