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Simply amazing. I love all the coincidences and the explanations the author inputs into the storyline. However, I feel like the main character should have a more accurate description of his "skill-set." But, this might be the writer's intention in shrouding it in mystery. I haven't read to the latest chapter, but I am gradually catching up. Anyways, I am loving the story so far.
I am on chapter 78 but so far I am liking what I am seeing and not only is this one of the very few webnovel novels that is clear with grammar and story telling its free so to give thanks to this beautiful author I am giving him a very good review as he is sacrificing a contract and this novel definitely deserves it to
Out of the 51 chapters posted, I have read 10 chapters. The story is interesting. The stability of updates is good, Story is developing nicely. The character design is OK. A world background is good but it is not specified which era it is or what place it is.There are some issues with typos and spellings. The capital for 'I' is used less and the small i is appearing. At some places the sentences start abruptly and the inverted commas of the speech portion get left behind. These mistakes do not however interfere with the reading of the book.I would suggest you run your draft through an online grammar checker. It will get rid of many of the errors. I also do that otherwise little mistakes tend to creep in.All the best.
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Really an amazing story. Its what you expect of a reencarnation/videogame novel but it has its unique strong points. For starters, his actions do not change the history of the game(yet, they probably will), but it is the AI he programmed that fills the gaps and makes the world different from ehat he programmed. Characters so far are solid and the world, as far as we've seen, is well thought and built. MC is real funny sometimes, which affs to his charm. Author is not a native english speaker, so he sometimes makes grammar or spelling mistakes, but it is nothing too obvious and I dare say his writing quality and syntax is better than most english speakers. As for updates stability, he is commited and usually updates once a day, but he sometimes takes breaks that are a bit too long. Anyway, overall I would give a 4.5, but since I like this story so much I decided on five. Really a good read. Highly recommended.
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If you have read any of the Author's other works and liked them, then you will thoroughly enjoy this one. This is definitely the Author's most refined work. The world building is good without too much of an info dump, and you are given more as needed. The pacing is good, and you get 2 chapters a day(as of this review), so there is enough content, but still leaves you wanting more. The characters are also well developed and have their own personalities and relationships outside of what they have with the MC. Give this one a shot of you like these types of novels.