shiro2
its been a good start and i hope it is...
The plotline for this novel is rather incomprehensible, and the main character's actions aren't very relatable. Then again, it is different, and I suppose uniqueness is important in the cultivation genre.
great story a must read is you don't mind some wrong words every now and then
Me: ''Yoo brudda you have a lil rad story you got there, am lovin it and you know it!! but i lil bit of chapters would be SOO cool of ya bruh''
This is really unique. I love the philosophical wisdom, the little science facts and also the cool tech stuff.My favorite character so far is Vicki. She's smart and sassy.
Liking the MC so far, brutal "friends" he has haha. Writing quality is continuing to improve, and the story is very promising. Logical plot, hateable antagonists, and a great story, great job, author!
Love your incredibly heartwarming stories. I wish you much success in your writing.. Good job and keep it up.. God bless you❤❤❤❤I'm a fan of yours❤❤❤❤❤
Ok the review is till chapter 33.Writing quality -5story development- 4 ( Till now, there's no specific storyline and the MC just wants to become strong so that he isn't being played under fate and how powerless he was to change his condition prior his transmigration.The MC doesn't gets much pumped or angry after the typical engagement break plot. So far, the plot is progressing but there's no definite or specific storyline which alignes with MCs goal. That maybe because only 33 chapters has been released.-Not much clichés and regular tropes, if there are, they barely go beyond one chapter.Character design-4 ( MC only wills to not be a pawn where he can't control anything.So far, being an orphan prior the transmigration, he had to work to feed himself making him quite headstrong and look on the poor side of the earth.Now that hes in a cultivation world, he can gauge what needs to be done when and how accordingly.He hasn't shown much toxic behavior except a typical poison MC tongue. Update stability -5 ( The more the better but the novel is in it's infant stage so only authors know when and how much to post. So far, decent pace.World background- 4 ( So far, there's not much description on world background except the 'cultivation world' is entirely in a different space, meaning, there's a barrier between the commoner world and cultivation world. The barrier is on an high altitude where one can't reach it until they can fly and enter it.Besides that, there's only introduction on one sect which makes it hard to gauge how wide the world is. Definitely larger than our earth though. Mc has a golden finger which he himself can't figure out it's origin but it's pretty much OP but it works depending on MCs cultivation level.I have read the mainstream Chinese novels that are on novel updates and ********** and I have big hopes for this novel. I haven't done a review before but loved the novel and couldn't refrain from doing it.
I like this story and continue looking for more chapters ????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
this novel was taken from somewhere else, I remember starting to read it a few years back but dropped it for being too tedious to read, I don't know if it's a stolen novel or a repost cuz I couldn't care less
Most authors rate their own story 5 stars. So uh I did it too. I hope you enjoy the story???I don't know what else to say. Have a good day?
So far loving the novel, just wish it would be a harem. And author stop describing boobs and jiggling butts if you are not giving us a lemon scene also if it's harem let the class rep be part of the harem
