The authors book provides a great amount of context of the environment with plenty of information. However, his obsession to provide every character their own two page dialogue and Background really ruins the entertainment from theMain story. IDk why he bothers when the reader know's they're a dead Man, EX investigator, and the nightclub kid (Achim). However, this is an Author who Clearly loves to write. I hope to read more of his work as he Improves. P.S Author... you forgot to mention the brain crystal from Martin Hais in chapter 290. (MC Never absorbed it in future chapters)
The first volume ie. first 40 chapter is amazing. from there the translation switch to MTL mode. Just read the first volume and consider it completed.
First, the world of mc is not earth, the world of mc is a world where 90% of the territory belongs to dangerous monsters.when her arm was attacked by a foreign creature or object causing pain and temporary loss of consciousness instead of consulting a specialist or doctor, she chose to go back to her private apartment to have her checked in person.hey dude, you're not a martial arts expert who has the expertise to identify monsters or other suspicious objects, you're just an ordinary human. Your logic is problematic, it doesn't match the environment you live in.the plot is too forced, if mc's logic is that stupid, even without the disease he suffers, he will still have a short life.
I have not read much yet so take this at face Value. I enjoy the few characters and their personalities that we have been introduced to so far. I also enjoy the plot, although it is not very unique i like where it is going. the only problem i have is that the writing can sound kind of weird like some things been written in present tense when it should have been written in past tense, but it does not bother me much. over all i recommend it ?
I am pretty much amazed as to how this novel is crafted. The FL is quiet and not presumptuous. Even if she was a top assassin in her previous life, she still acts her age and doesn't underestimate other people just because she has more experience. She is the quiet one beside her temperamental brother but her performance is outstanding. She is super low key. I am just a little down that I am already up to date and is itching to know more. Ahhh.. I just hope that there would be more updates.
Chapters are VEry short. messy plots and issues. Also i just gotta point out, super rich guy who is bedding several hot ladies still not happy with his life and wants more woman so he can be more awesome??? Like WTH??
great start I like this main character better than gods eyes I think still got to wait and see what his class is going to be. keep the chapters coming cause I'm reading ?
raw link please.......................... . . . . . . . . . .. . . . .. . . .... ... . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .
Hmm, I read the raws, the story is so good at the beginning, but as the story progress through about 100+ chaps, I feel like the story and the focus of the novel swayed a bit or so...... Also it looks like the MC become a little or quite weak compared to the strenght he shows in the starter parts of the story. But overall, I dropped it midway, but hey the start is quite good, unfortunately it seems it is losing its potential bit by bit.
For now i think it’s going well, but MC needs to differentiate himself from the rest. If all he’ll do is befriend strong characters he himself seems useless. it should centre him and if he befriends or kill’s the 5 plane children the it’s a bonus, all the 5 plane children happen to just make the story more interesting is what I’m saying. Basically what i‘m saying is i read the story but MC still feels detached, so far his feminine looks seem like the best thing about him when actually his potential is just as great as if not better than the plane children, but i guess maybe I’m judging to much he’s still 13 after all. Anyways I don’t know if Author see’s these comments but I’m definitely looking forward to his character development. ✌?✌?
From the first few chapters it really features our author's great pov about the world and its way of thinking....But going after 4 to 5 chapter its gonna tell u about avengers.....I guess our author is a big fan of avenger...... Well writting and plot was also awesomely described....
the story is wholesome and full of mystery i guess or not. hahaha.