Really amazing novel. Really hope the author continues sometime soon.
Nice story, nice writing skill. I hope this review help you
if i can give more star to world ? background i would the novel is great over all
AND HERE I WAS SHOCKED THAT THIS STORY WAS GIVEN ONLY WITH 1.9 RATINGS! THIS STORY IS MAGNIFICENT BUT THERE ARE SHAMLESS THIEVES IN THE WORLDDDD!!DELETEEEEEEEEE!!!!
Lots of spelling, lexical and grammatical mistakes.. Sometimes it is hard to understand the meaning of the sentence, often misspelled he/she/his/hers, kind/king etc. A lot of repeatability, repeating words, repeatedly, saying the same again and again, then repeat it. Definitely needs an editor. Story development is something subjectively, it is a bit slow for my liking, but it is a good story and it could raise into something great, while character development is pretty good, yet not too fast or too deep, you can feel the characters and there is a lot of space left for their development. As for world background 45 chapters deep, I know almost nothing. It's some casual city [suggestion], guess it is something reader has to create while reading. As for stability of updates I have just started yesterday, seeing in early chapters in author notes saying (2 a day, then 10 a week, then 5 a week, 12,4,7,20,1... For god's sake couldn't it be juse when you have time even one a week would be enough if not announced 10 a week. Author (yes actually author) is writing 4-5 or maybe more idk. novels at the same time, not good enough quality even asking for donations under every single chapter. *I am quiting*. Please edit your plain texts, concentrate on one or two novels at a time, keep the good story and chapters, maybe add a single detail either on VR and real world and I will be more than happy to continue reading and donate.
Hmmmmm.. are you so fed up by Shameless Bai that you created your own Number 1 Under Heaven xDSPACESPACESPACESPACESPACESPACESPACESPACESPACESPACESPACESPACESPACESPACESPACESPACESPACESPACESPACESPACESPACESPACESPACESPACESPACESPACESPACESPACESPACESPACESPACESPACESPACESPACESPACESPACESPACE
5 Star just for the sake of it, after all who cares about ratings from before any chapters were even released...ggwp beeches gtg bye and some other random bull
He should give the pills he no longer needs to his family and the sect so that they can help the sect and his family become stronger. And write all the techniques and manuals he has learn down to help the kids in the sect to learn faster and understand them better.
Essentially, this novel is about a guy from modern time being transmigrated into the body of a kid from prehistoric times. He utilises such knowledge to gain the favour a tribe.The world background is of a backwater mountain that consists of different tribes, with giant monsters, and men being able to rival strength similar to that of these monsters.He has morals and ethics as demonstrated in him stopping cannibalism and slavery in the tribe.
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Isn’t this I’m a quadrillion? All they did was change the names . It’s literally a total copy??????
The best thing I find here is the writing quality since it is so easy to understand and detailed. The details are hard to understand in some books but here that's not the case.I see a chapter every day so the updates look stable.The story looks well thought and the characters look fine too... (Just read the synopsis guys, if this isn't a unique plot, what is?)The world background, the time intervals between the events everything is also written well.Overall, I really think it's a good story with a unique plot and good writing. Keep up the good work :)