grammar is rather lacking don't know if their first language is English or not at least it doesn't feel like it. story is a bit to slow for me even though the author stated it would be slow paced. to me the progress of his students is to slow and the leveling just doesn't make sense, there is never a point where there exp isn't at 0 it feels like when they advance through each level so it really doesn't make me feel like they're progressing chapter to chapter. also the students have S-S+ potential yet it's taken like 6+months just to get to beginner mortal Grade. isn't S+ supposed to be some super genius? I mean Sam had D rank potential yet got to elite tier by the time he was 25 while his students with S+ are barely on pace with that it literally makes no sense
still no update? please give us some chapters
I'm too lazy to make a real review, so stop asking for reviews and just keep writing, I want more to read. I want my Limy back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I’m here again, hoping that we can have a chance to work together and we are willing to pay you for distributing your work.The conditions should be generous. If you are interested, please contact me via this email:adaren06*@*gmail.com(delete *）, then I should take this opportunity to discuss it with you in details.
Hello! I am the author. I gave a review based on how I would critique it myself. I am very critical of my own work, so don't take it as what other people would think of it!I try my best to have as few grammatical and spelling errors as possible, so it shouldn't be hard to read! I plan to have many volumes, I know for sure more than six, so you will have much to read!
Really good, I look forward to the continuation!He falls into my library without hesitationI really like the concept,hoping you do not abandon him140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...
Hey, you guys should give Me some advice.
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
The story is definitely interesting, I enjoyed reading it. A few minor no big deal errors but its easily overlooked since the story is really interesting. continue the great work !
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i have read the whole i initial chapters, and believe me when I say I couldn't stop reading it. It was a very interesting concept of story! The right mix of fiction and action in one book! it was amazing. Good job, Author!
This story is good and I like the idea of ML waking up in a book that he trash talked. I believe there's room for improvement in the writing quality. It's not bad by any means, but it's not the best it could be.Also the story is a bit forgettable and I struggled to remained interested. It's a good idea, but it doesn't quite stick the landing for me.I can tell it'll get better as it goes on, but for now I'll just say this story is good enough.