FBI_KuN
I am incredibly delighted to have discovered this light novel, yet a bit melancholy that I started reading it during its early translation phase. Nevertheless, I wholeheartedly appreciate the translation team for bringing it to our attention.
From the very beginning when there were only eight chapters, I became an avid reader. Despite my desire to binge-read, I couldn't help but savor each installment, as they were all engaging and left me wanting more. The protagonist, Frey, possesses numerous captivating traits that keep the story compelling. A well-rounded character, he's kind without being overly naive, knowing when to take decisive action. Though strong, he doesn't overshadow the plot; his struggles in battles make him relatable and deserving of our support.
His mission to save the world seems more like a burden than an ally, which turns his journey into a solo battle against constant enemies. In essence, Frey embodies a misunderstood hero, striving to protect without understanding the animosity directed at him. I hope for a blossoming romance, perhaps a slow-burning but genuine connection, where Frey, unlike some other dense characters, isn't oblivious to the emotions around him.
In conclusion, this light novel has captured my interest with its compelling protagonist and intriguing storyline, and I eagerly anticipate what lies ahead.
"[Status update on 12/27/20]: Haha, just created an account so decided to leave a review. I absolutely adore this web novel! It's the only one I actively check for updates and keep reading. Highly recommend! Although there hasn't been much interaction between the main character (MC) and the male lead (ML) yet, I have a hunch about who he might be. Frankly, I'm okay with the slow-burn romance, especially since the MC is currently in a child's body, around 10-12 years old. What I really enjoy is the xianxia aspect - that's the heart of the story. Initially, there was a massive cliffhanger, but the subsequent chapters didn't disappoint, though it wasn't as intense as I expected. The MC's calm demeanor keeps things interesting. I can relate to Ji-ji, the little blue chicken 'system.' I'm excited to see how the romance unfolds and thoroughly enjoy the read. [Update on 4/15/21]: Still a lot of fun! MC and ML have met, and it's exactly who I guessed. They're becoming friends and growing closer, which is adorable. Since the MC is still a preteen, I'm not expecting major romantic developments anytime soon, unless there's a time skip. But seeing their camaraderie is delightful, and I'm loving the blend of xianxia plot. It's great to find a novel that focuses on cultivation with a subtle BL subplot - it keeps things fresh and enjoyable <3"
Warning: This might be a lengthy critique.
It's the start of a new year, and I find myself with idle time, so I decided to finish this book within just three days. Yes, I have plenty to share about my thoughts on this novel.
In short, our protagonist穿越到了一本小说里,扮演配角炮灰。她只想尽快完成自己的剧情,以便"System"能让她随心所欲。她讨厌书中的男、女主角,尽量避开他们,表面上却装出爱意。当男主角解除婚约后,她终于能展现出真实自我。
起初,故事吸引人,让人对主角和她的处境,以及与男主角(未婚夫)及家庭的关系感到好奇。然而,很快情节变得乏味。正如大家所说,主角过于强大,她比男主角更漂亮,做什么都顺利,无论是成为畅销歌手还是无心插柳地投资成功,甚至面对泼脏水都能迅速反击。男主角的求婚被取消后,她反而吸引了更富有的CEO的注意。
角色发展缺乏逻辑,主角似乎从未需要付出努力就获得一切。其他配角也显得平淡无奇,特别是男主角,作者对其刻画得非常单薄,他除了对主角的爱慕外几乎无任何个性。朋友的存在只是为了陪伴,前未婚夫因爱情盲目,而女配角的智商令人难以置信,每次遇到主角都会变得更糟,像污水般越陷越深。
唯一有成长弧线的角色是主角的弟弟,他虽然骄纵,但有自己的骄傲和目标,最终从无用之人变成受尊重的人物,他是我最喜欢的角色。
在叙事上,由于我不会中文,不确定是原作还是翻译的问题,但对话感觉混乱不清,有时分不清谁在说什么,还有些地方似乎缺少台词。作者也经常在重要场景戛然而止,我认为这对读者不公平,像是偷懒。例如:
**剧透**
有一幕,男主角试图阻止女主角捣乱,因为他明白她的愚蠢,最终会收拾残局。但在男主角说出"你赢不了"后,场景突然跳转,两人关系破裂。这是一个展现男主角对女主角失望和后悔的重要时刻,但作者却草率结束,真让人生气。
撇开这些不满,最初的一百多章我还是挺享受的,因为主角行事果决,让人耳目一新。阅读这样的故事,感觉很解压。但别期待深度的故事情节,把它当作轻松搞笑或睡前消遣更好。
总的来说,这本书不算太差,但写得并不出色。我会给它三星评价。
"Genius Aberrant: Prodigious Miss Overturning The World With Her Aberration" captivated me with its unique blend of intellect and imagination. The protagonist's extraordinary talent, though initially an anomaly, unfolds into a riveting journey that challenges societal norms. Her tenacity and the unexpected twists left me on the edge of my seat. A thought-provoking read that celebrates the power of individuality, it's a page-turner that stays with you long after the last chapter.
"The God Rank Upgrade System" captivated me with its intriguing blend of action and ambition. The protagonist's journey from humble beginnings to godly prowess was both exhilarating and thought-provoking. The concept of leveling up not just physically but morally resonated deeply, making for a well-rounded narrative. The pacing was spot on, keeping me hooked till the very end. A must-read for those who crave immersive world-building and character development.
I can't overcome the prejudice I gained from seeing its cover. It looks lame af imo.
Man I love this novel , BUT the translator lam lam is simply amazing I always look forward to his notes at the end of the chapters , can anyone tell me other novels he translated
Another brilliant story translated by Atlas Studios! Never a dull moment till the very end. There are face-slapping moments, tear jerking moments, dog food moments... long story short, a truly enjoyable story to read. Thank you to Atlas Studios for another high quality translation.
I'm not going to write much, I'm going to be simple and direct, the MC villain was cool but, as always, the nerf came[img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
so far so good we'll see where the story takes us
What do cat girls eat? Cat food? Or girl food?
Do they purr when you pet them?
Do they hate or love bath?
Do they nap a lot?
The author seems to love catgirls so I'll give them 5 stars for this meowsterpiece!
Hope this stay free! Take my powerstones!
Haven't read it yet, but I'm hoping it will be as great as Greed.
