High expectations won’t be sad if it get chosen but would ratter have tanky mage of great voyage but this novel still has a lot of potential
Novel is trash even if it is the author’s first novel. Has horrible grammar. All woman are useless in this novel which irritates many people. Has weak character foundation.
Well it's been 9 months and I hope that the author decides to continue this work... I thought chapters 3,4,5 were straight up hardcover publisher quality quality... Some of the latter chapters get a bit wordy in a way that does not develop, enrich, or further the plot or characters but more a word count extension... THAT being said, the writing quality of this story is easily near the top of WebNovel... ... Another reviewer made a great point, "An interesting take on a game world and its mechanics. The 'balanced fortunes' system (for lack of a better name) that the world has is a surprising new take on how a game may be designed, at least in my reading/playing experience." ... ... The work feels like it has some of the flavor of "Ready Player One
Very interesting plot and already has some good twists. Can't wait for the rest of it. Had me reading 3 in the morning. Translation isn't that bad just has a few errors that are easy to see and fix. I don't feel like their is much room for character development as the protagonist seems set in his ways, however their is still a lot that we can find out about the character. Cant wait to see how this story developed.
It's my first time doing something like this, so if you find something wrong, comment on it, and I will try to improve it.English, it's not my primary language, so there will be some errors...unfortunately.As I set up the plot of my book, there will definitely be a second book.The second one will bring Tian Yang's journey to... well, it's a secret XD.The length of the book... I'm still unsure about that.About my characters:Tian Yang is naturally the main one. But, I will also develop his wives and friends widely.Especially his wives, there will surely be dozens and dozens of chapters about their lives. (Past, Present, and Future)For those who want to experience a bit more of Tian Yang's story, I'm currently working on something a bit crazy.I opened a YouTube Channel.Are you wondering why I opened a channel?Well... I will do some animation about minor parts of the story. (I'm still a bit crude in that part so, there will be nothing exaggerated.)I'll create the most interesting parts, which popped out in my mind, and make some videos.Don't worry, there will be no video with me or anything else so boring.I also hid some tips about the story and the character inside them, especially the hidden character who will introduce every video.I hope you will find it interesting and I hope you will enjoy reading my book.
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feels like it's some copy paste novel ? ?
Sooooooooooooooooooooo good to read and very interestingIt needs more sex scenesPlease...............I will make it more interesting I promise and
A unique concept like reincarnation but done in a different way, most reincarnation novels only reincarnate the soul but this novel practically scarp that and gave the stale concept a refreshing touch. The system interaction with the MC is kind of like in the novel monster hunter where the system isn't dull or boring. A great concept and a great novel if executed correctly.
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Pls update this translator! This is the only app where my ipad can open and download Emperors domination and no other app because theyre trashI beg of you to pls update who cares if you plagiarize... just update it pls!
This is honestly my first time reading a webnovel, I've only read the first chapter before sleep but I'm already expecting alot from thisThe only issue with it is the consistency, I've viewed the release date of every chapter and I understand if the author has some issues irl due to him not updating the novel but it just ticks me off.Overall, for my first webnovel it's good.