"So one suit to rule them all, but it will cost an arm and a leg?" Peter chuckled.
Lu Shuya was quiet for a moment, so Lu Duyi used this to talk more.
I sort of understood. Some impurity was in the new material, and it reacted badly with magic and acid. "So try to take out the impurity? Or go back to the last supplier."
"Whack," my plan worked only a little. Only some of the strike was mitigated. Not missing his chance to attack, my assailant struck my body slowing from the strike my assailant started laying into my ribs with palm strikes. He was able to hit me six times before my body responded to my control. I activated by biotic shield again. When his next palm strike came it broke my shield. Causing him to bounce back. It was formed to hastily to provide any real defense. But that's ok. I wanted it for the quick recharge. Taking the energy in, I squatted low and came up with everything I had hitting him in the gut.
Stretching her hands out to remove his clothes, she was stopped by a fierce and firm grip. Glancing up calmly and with slight annoyance, Rin's eyes met with Manchu's cool blue ones.
With the Panish armada effectively out of commission, there was none left to contest Breetish rule over the seas.
Sir Zah, no. Dragons are a powerful force. If they were all to fight, they could raze a kingdom to the ground quite quickly, it was a great thing that they only kept to the interior of Mismede along the border to Great Sea of Trees. They have many reasons to begrudge being hunted too just to be turned into magical ingredients.
Noah "I don't think that I can hold them for much longer though".
The school intramurals was ongoing and some students who took extra curricular activities like sports joined in the competion. Analyze joined the judo competition while Akira went for lawn tennis. Akira's match was early and both siblings watch him play, he won the singles division. As for Ana both friends watch and cheered for her she has to win 3 match to qualify for the next round. The day ended and they celebrated for winning because that evening the awarding would be held.
Writing quality /3starsupdating stability. /3starsstory development/0starscharacter design. /1starsWorld background/0starsOverall the quality story background everything just goes downhill and gets progressively worse and worse and worse and obviously the offer does not take any criticism or advice from comments to improve his story and has gotten to the point where he has no one reading his story
It’s quite some time since I came about a good slice of life BL novel like this. I am just worried about the harem part at the back as it’s quite to pull it off. Nevertheless, hope the author won’t drop this work. I’m literally dying for new updates☠️
It’s a great story and I really enjoyed it. However, I think it should be a bit fast paced in my opinion as if it goes on slowly explaining the world he is currently in like the rest of the novels, it would remove the whole point of him reincarnating in different world after he dies. Moreover, I feel like the author should drop a hint or two in the worlds he’s gonna reincarnate about why him and his friends are going through this reincarnation thing like what’s the whole point other than them becoming stronger, also I feel that a great antogonist should be introduction that’s against them reincarnating.