I really don't know what to say. If you don't like the author taking his time to develop the MC. If you don't like a slow paced(to me its plenty fast) then don't read this Novel.The author is taking his time to write the story in which this socially awkward otaku comes to a cultivation world. He is letting him learn so that he may eventually become the unfathomable patriarch. What i am saying is don't read if you don't like. Stop commenting on how bad it is. The only mistake the author made is that he is a newcomer if it was a seasoned author you all would be calling this the best novel...
Its a decent book so far, sounds like it will keep getting better as the story progresses. I dont really like mc who are always trying to stay under the radar and having his abilities explained everytime his stats are shown is just a major waste of word count its at least 1/4th of the chapter everytime, thats the biggest issue of the book.
really enjoyed the work that has been done so it's a automatic 5 star from me
Great story, bro! I've really enjoyed it from the very first chapter to the latest one. You've got something special here. However, I have a suggestion: consider drawing inspiration from Japanese sports manga and anime, especially when it comes to adding emotional depth. Series like Diamond no Ace or Haikyuu!! excel at incorporating sad or challenging moments without diving too deep into dark themes. Right now, it feels like you're introducing some really heavy, dark elements that don't quite fit the tone of a sports story, which should be more about youth, energy, and the spirit of competition.It's totally fine to have the main character face struggles on their journey to the top, but there are more fitting ways to explore those setbacks without turning every 50 chapters into a tragedy. You’re crafting an excellent story, and I truly believe it could be even better if you lightened up on the darker elements.I love your work, and I genuinely appreciate your storytelling. I just wanted to share my thoughts because I think your story has the potential to be even more enjoyable. Keep up the great work
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Really enjoyable read ? The world background is imaginative and the MC was likeable!Skills and weapon names are very creative, I'm a gamer so I'm used to stats and skills so it was easy to read and understand. Tho I think even if ur not a gamer the skills etc are explained really well. ??Keep up the great work author, I'll look forward to updates!
a fun read !.........................................................................................................................
This is a fresh idea and I’m thrilled how good this book will be so vote this book so that it comes out this/next week......................
The premise and concept of the book itself are interesting. This might just be my personal preference but I like the idea of the game.And I am excited to see what would happen next to Manu. The author has written it in 1st POV so I expect more details of the ML's thoughts and feelings. also, WE NEED MORE CHAPTERS!!!
Tl:dr not a novel for everyoneImagine yourself in a retirement home watching 2 grandfathers play chess and chatting about their past. That rich emotional depth and glacial pace of development is expressed perfectly in novel form by this story.This is the story of and old man living in a manner that befits an old man perfectly. There are no flashy power ups, no world ending fight scenes, no flashy special effects... nothing which normally accompanies most works on webnovel. Instead we get a fight scene we get poetry expressed through conflict. Instead of world altering cultivation breakthroughs we get an understanding of the joys of quiet cultivation in solitude. This novel might not be your cup or tea; which is perfectly fine. Just know going in that it is going to be different then most.
This is another of those hardly seen books with only two words as the title (unlike paragraph titled books). The title has two words, Onnipotent and Sage.... which we all know what each stand for.... it means it's about some NEET dude who died and becomes a very OP person, and from the description, an OP person of justice... see, even his hands are made of iron, a true sage
I initially wanted to read this to return the favor of shadowlord checking out my novel but now I can't drop it....Awesome write up shadowlord keep up the good work. Awesome cultivation novel. I'm giving this a full five stars.Author, May your ideas never run out.You can check out my novel >> Godly Abomination Returns