JakeRob
Why does Webnovel bring back novels that are trash, do you think second time is a charm in this scenario? The other NEW novels were put on hold for a week due to this novel
mc is behaving contradictory to his on belief as he thinks he is not real prince so he has nothing to do with royal family but remember that one of his brother good to real prince so he helps him become the king but he doesn't even meet the the real prince mother as he has no feelings for real prince mother....... Really?
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First of all it started very good but as the story went on it started to get quite unrealistic and annoying, The MC is much more talented the other people yet he add a group of young people to his band? and all of them agree? they all move together? The MC adding them together was a mistake.In my opinion the story could've been the story would've been much more enjoyable if that didn't happen.
let's make this novel number 1#. this is the best one that i have readed here on web novel so far. keep up the good work Czester. p.s what got you started on writing this novel.
so its pretty good ngl I like how you implemented naruto's parents and jutsu in it but I have 2 questions.1. will he get the sharingan and if so the mangekyo sharingan too.2. will he get kakashis lightning blade and other jutsu.
So, before I start reviewing this novel and explaining as to why I am giving it 5 stars, I want to say that Author should change the name of this novel to Revival of Eastern Roman Empire/Roman Empire, using the name some idiot thought to be romantic shouldn't be allowed.now, with ranting out of the way, let's move on to the review itself.Writing Quality - it isn't superb per-say, but, it only has few occasional mistakes and as such deserves at least 4.5 stars.Stability of Updates - 5 stars, because looking at it, it doesn't seem like he missed a day without a reason(such as being in the army, duh)Story Development - one of the things I really love in this novel is that it doesn't jump you straight into the action, it introduces characters left and right without making you feel tired and overwhelmed with all the Greek or Turkish names. fight scenes aren't forced and they are quite nicely introduced into the play. as such story development of this novel gets 5 stars.Character Design - now, this is the major thing that you should love in this novel if you love history... and that is characters... almost every character in this novel is someone you can google and learn more about. the only mistake I have seen so far in 90 chapters is Vladislav II Dracula, and it isn't that big of a mistake, just delete 'Dracula' in that name and everything is fine. Main Character is a likeable character and Side characters are actually important and 'alive', with their distinct personalities.World background - now this one is tough to rate because there are some amazing details that Author has implemented in his story, but there are some absurd things as well... like there being smoking pipes in the 15th century... as such I am giving the world background solid 4.8(there are other mistakes as well apart from smoking pipes, that's why it gets 4.8)Finally, the novel itself according to these criteriums gets... 4.825 Stars :P but Webnovel says it's 4.8... (don't trust it)
The writing quality is mostly good, very little mistakes and the reading flows well.Characters development so far is good, I appreciate the details some of the minor characters have. Though I don't really see too much original thought in the characters they are plenty good enough. I enjoy reading about all of them.World building so far is adequate as it is just the first 20 chapters.Great story with an original concept though I can forsee issues in the future with creating movies for the MC to act in I think it will be interesting to follow. Love it so far.Updates are somewhat stable, hope for more as always.Written at Chapter 21
I wish he could make another basketball novel where the main characters abilities are a bit toned down, similar to Rebound. I still like this novel, just became a bit less interesting after he became so OP he could easily annihilate LeBron 21-0.
Author deletes reviews that are under 4 stars so this is 5 star in suckiness.Congratulation for the writer. There are grammatical errors in the first few sentences...
I LOVE IT! I love stories about pets similar to this!!!! PLEASE I WANT THIS STORY TO CONTINUE!!!!! I like how each pets is distinct and evolves. I jusf wish for more info for other monsters but what it has rught now works just fine.
At the start of the novel the story was quite good but as it started moving every other characters except the MC became idiots and cowards.(But personally I think the MC would have died so many times if not for plot armour due to his arrogance).The only thing I still like about this novel is the detailed categorisation of talents.
