I think this story has potential, the plot is pleasant not so fast or slow, especially the alternative world if it takes advantage of it well it will develop very well, well I hope and do not drop the novel, thanks to the author.Sorry for the spelling mistakes, English is not my first language.
NINJAA fantasy name that filled every kid that watches Naruto Anime. This is not Naruto fanfic but it gives it vibes. the novel took a little serious path and also enjoyable.it's a story of strong Ninja that Travel back in time after the defeats of Human kinds by the Notorious 75 Demons lord.But the good thing about the Novel is that, the defeat is course by the humans themselves. It's shows that if humanity has not fallen to depravity and kill themselves their power will be enough to withstand the Demons attack.But, Greed for Power and other depravity that human fall into, it's what makes them be destroyed.With all above explanation, you will see the novel will take a different approach in solving the problem. it's not about just improving the humanity's power, as they are already strong, But rather about uniting them together. Well this is my hypothesis. Since it's only three chapter maybe something change.It's a very good read.
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Loved the story's background and setting as well as the characters I read. The author has a vivid imagination and has created a world for us to enjoy! Great Job!