I read the MTL. It's pretty good, a bit of harem-ish elements but there's no polygamy. Law scenes are slightly unrealistic for dramatic purposes, but definitely a good novel for what normally appears here. Easily the best for this selection.
If you want to read ahead, be sure to head to the P-a-t-r-e-o-n! I'm a basketball lover and have been writing this for my P-a-t-r-e-o-n exclusively. Hope that you guys show up there, cause this is only getting updated once a week just like The Aeternus Universe here on Webnovel.
grammar is so horrible that I don't understand what is going on in the novel.................................................................
I Just wanna Know if there is any raw,,, if there is pls link me i will be super grateful
It's a really amazing ?Most helpful for all of us Overall :- mind-blowing ?...............................................................................................................................
The story plot is really creative, i could really enjoy the way the story was going, but it's a bit confusing sometimes due to some manor grammatical errors. The author is doing well, you have my encouragement. Work hard, and you'll only get better and better.
Well so far i really like this novel.But i'm quite confused because the author said that the update will resume of 3de February.But their are no new chapter so far
This novel is the first of its kind in a way, but it lacks the depth to become something truly great. It doesn't show the rehearsals and hard work that goes into being an artist, and avoids the shift in perspective that comes from a change in status. Given, if you have never experienced it, there is no way you will know how to wrote about it. Still, this novel is a good, amateur-like, interpretation of a multi-talented, famous person, but don't expect any deep insight or anything beyond superficial approximations of what its like to be famous.
Writing Quality is actually ok for me. But almost everything else is all wrong. Cheat is kinda weird. It says evolution but it says hidden evolution but still the standard lizard to snake to python to flood dragon to blah blah blah template. Classic sparrow bird template. And for his second beast he just had to get a cloud mist beast that publicly only has a Level three potential leading to another few rounds of underestimation and mocking from enemies and face slapping from the MC. No depth, No originality, nothing fascinating and no twist and turns. No tension, no charm, bland and lacks relativity and creativity. And the funny thing is that this book still had more than 16k Powerstone supporting it. Ain't that funny? way more than the leading book on the Powerstone rankings. And it's absolute garbage. World background is lacking. All experienced readers, prepare to lose some brain cells if you read this.Cliche lines, cliche plot, very predictable.My final evaluation, Author is terrible at writing with zero innovation. Unless of course this is just a trial read and the author isn't taking this seriously.
since when vit is equals to mana? seriously did the author even know how to play a game or he just read something and plagiarised and change it a little even if he doesn't know a single thing about it
hmmm very interesting concept, I like where this is going. All I can say is keep it up. I'd really like to see more of this because this is pretty cool. Really looking forward to more. Your descriptiveness is also really captivating, and your grammar is pretty good. I'll rate this a 5.0
story repeats over and over, it's really horrible .