Emerald and Raphaels part of the book was so heart felt, So passionate, loving. The ending was more than I had hoped for (in a good way!) My goodness the authors writing gets better with every chapter written. Don't miss out on her great writing! She's already working on her next book, look on GN!
Great novel .... loved it
This story is very different to others out there which is great. Can’t wait to see how Sam and Olivia’s relationship develops. Nikita is clearly going to be trouble!!
each book is better then the last
Love it!!!! I need more chapters!
Got me on my toes??
Have t made it very far into this book, but there are tons of mistakes and not only grammar ones. Very frustrating trying to read and make sense of some things. Sorry but I can’t give this book too high of a rating at this time.
It's a slow burn but it's great
I read rape. I stop reading. Good thing it happened already in chapter 1. Disgusting. Bye.
love it......
Why no updates author please update.
English isn't my primary language, so please forgive any errors. The fanfiction started off strong, with an engaging protagonist, intriguing world exploration, and well-developed characters. However, the recent chapters have taken a turn for the worse. The protagonist has become increasingly self-centered, seemingly oblivious to the needs of others, which was a surprising shift for me. His treatment of Shanks, essentially keeping him as a captive for his own gain, is particularly distasteful, and he even portrays it as a favor. While I initially found the acquisition of another Akuma no Mi intriguing, subsequent chapters have failed to captivate me. Despite giving the story another chance with the recent installments, I'm now on the brink of losing interest.