good story so far keep up good work .......................................................
i need the raw, this seems like a good read, especially the name of the mc, reminds me of the strongest system. .
The story is promising, I can't give five tho. The story piqued my interest as I read further, Keep a good work author. Lalalalalalalalllaallala
It's a good novel ... then they put the spirit stones for every chapter.....well time to drop it @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@
THIS BOOK IS AMAZING!! KEEP GOING WITH IT!!
I had high hopes but I've been let down completely....bland chicken for 10 silvers and MC is like my stuff is way better so I can earn more then proceeds to sell his stuff at 3 silvers for the magic restoring potatoes which can easily go up to thousands of silver coins which he should know
sigh ... don't be fooled by the cover. the focus of the story is totally different. also, it is such a hard read. the story development is abrupt. dialogue feels out of place. sentences are sometimes so long that they stop making sense. author Skips some things which makes us understand what was he trying to say. he sometimes writes totally opposite things what he meant. which leaves us with scratch our head. wastes too much time in describing things which r not done properly. and I don't know what the heck is going on in most chapters. sigh....such a disappointment. I recommend author to write smaller sentences. and readers to read comments so they don't get much confused.
Great wuxia novel.For Kylse, please dont misuse this space for your personal reason. This is a review section FOR the novel.Why did the first and the second paragraph of your comment contradicted ? The first one was justified because you did care about the novel itself but why did you defend Qidian and thinks that all of us is stupid on your second paragraph ? isnt this what you call by selfish or personal reason that dont have a connection about thr novel itself ? ** : sorry english wasnt my first leaguage
haaah... dont read... it a typical: your sister is not your sister and she's OP but not OP, your above average but your still average, everyone hates you and you have no friends oh but you have best friends? (so you don't NOT have friends).. your power level 9000 but even the pre schoolers can kill you; kinda novel thats all over the place... I could not for the life of me push past chapter 7
bro the author of this novel is dead because of overwork 3ch/d lol
pretty good all things considered, a bit of some words that arent PC but oh well, I honestly enjoy the little bit of vulgar speech as being to polite or nice is just a total turn off. I'm enjoying the pacing and would definitely recommend giving it a read. Story is aight but I'm mostly here to see more funny ways this dude can trigger people????
It's a disappointment. LOHP was not that good either, but this is definitely bad. The whole thing is lacking creativity. I hesitated to start reading it because the synopsis was not interesting. I decided to read it after some time and got what I expected... I feel like the author burned out and just pushing the mainstream thing to get money.