AllObservingReader7r
This book got me hooked.
Hello guysss, if you see some grammatical errors please, don't give this book a 1 star review. I'm trying my best to edit this book especially Chapter 100-102. I'm a first timer author. Giving five stars reviews will help this book to be promoted. God bless guys! Hope you're all safe.
Over 400 chapters later and Silvia is still being tortured. Odell is a sadist and suffers no consequences for his actions. Tara gets away with everything. If you like the FL to be helpless and tormented, the ML to be blind and incapable, the mistress to be a winner for hundreds of chapters read now
The book is completed,,,much appreciation to everyone who's read it through and for all the votes
good read! would read again.
Nice story ????
this is the best piece I have ever read before
interesting so far. please update more author. I'm sure this book is gonna be great
Really bad ending for mark and Sydney it’s like the author didn’t know what to write plus she kept gettinb the names mixed up and then it went into aiden and anatasia, if you are going to write another story at least do it separately not in the one book.
Thoroughly enjoying the novel... it might not be to everyone’s taste as it is quite risqué... it includes a lot of non-consensual scenes, focusing on power dynamics between a poor orphan girl who serves as the 'play maid' of the Crown Prince. If you are uncomfortable with this topic, please do not read.
To me, it's just average. There are far better things to read out there.
Additionally, the main character seems to appear in only about 50% of the chapters, if that. Much of the story revolves around the characters who interact with the main character rather than the MC themselves.
Also, there's been very little harem development so far. I'm putting the book on hold for now; I might come back to it, or I might not.
The series ended after Volume 5. Initially, the first couple of volumes were decent, featuring a decent revenge storyline within a sect with political intrigue and numerous factions vying for power. There were standard declarations of surpassing realms and the concept of a greater, more powerful world outside, which were somewhat clichéd but not deal-breakers if the characters and plot were engaging.
However, the enjoyment waned over time. The excessive focus on introducing more than 40 uninteresting characters, alongside only a few that I cared about, became unbearable. Since they all received equal screen time, I found myself skipping entire chapters about characters I had no emotional investment in. If I wasn't even reading the majority of the chapters, the motivation to continue dwindled.
It's evident that the author relies on chapter counts for income, but this particular work felt excessively drawn-out. Battle scenes dragged on endlessly, shallow mysteries were unnecessarily prolonged, and minor characters with predictable fates were given lengthy exposition to emphasize their one-dimensional nature. In the end, it just wasn't worth my time.
