Spoilers are bad sir
The sypnosis us misleading
Honestly the story is very decent,started off a bit rough but once you continue to read ahead it's nice.love the work man
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this has to be the worst translation I've ever seen the story would be much better if it actually made sense
This novel is awesome ? 10/10 do recommend.only critique is that maybe the author should get a better novel cover.
I like the story and the way it is improving, the further developmentBut for me i could not understand why is the author making reading more complex, like he could have just said I am always thinking about him instead he goes on explaining poetically, becoz of it, it is only making harder to understand I don't know whether it is to increase the word cound odr whatever it may be but that is the only thing which I don't like about it
Dear author, I just wanted to say how much I've enjoyed reading your web novel so far. Your world-building is absolutely fantastic,I can't wait to see where the story goes from here! Thank you for sharing your talent with us, and please keep up the great work.
Good start, and the story is actually reasonably paced. The plot is also better than the endless numbers of system harem faceslapping novels.
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My review on the first 20 chapters:Translation isn't the worst, but it could do with some improving. The names of realms and such will switch from time to time, but it's bearable.The story isn't anything new except for the fact that from what we know right now, the mc is living on a floating island that's composed of several clans/villages. Outside of that is the bigger cultivation world which we still have little understanding of. The past 20 chapters haven't really shown anything substantial enough for me to comment further and the mc feels quite bland. Wouldn't be my first choice for this week's trial read but it could have been worse.