TouchofDarkness
Nice one !I realy Enjoyed reading very much
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The translation quality is quite good but the story ruins it. Literally, I feel like the mc is just a bit too stupid and it doesn't fit his ten thousand some year mental age. Most of the side characters and cannon fodders are 1D. The World Background could be described in one word infinite. Like the author could write 1 million chapters on the world itself. There is no real goal in the novel besides take revenge for every petty little things the mc had suffer in his previous life. We are talking about 10000 years of history here. All in all this novel is just trash. Garbage worse than Trump's Coronavirus prevention campaign.
What's going on?This novel only has 60 chapter and is already discontinued for a year!!clearly a chashgrab or a filler... completely useless novel
I came because of Er Gen, and I very much stayed because of the Captain??? May this Guy live a long life in this story, unlikely as that may be
Another great novel with hilarious story its funnny and not boring to read, i hope this one got updated fast dont be so long at trial read..
Dayum this is good... at least till now. Of all the new novels this one is the cream of the crop. The translation is good for now as there are little grammatical errors. The world background is still in the build. The character design is not too overused and the focal is less on the main character which is, truthfully quite a fresh read. No nonsensical unreasonable system. No overused "Oh I think this cultivation technique is the most suitable for me" type of story. The main character made up technique is a mishmash of various cultivation chants and made up nonsense ?
makes no sense
Good Recommended 7/10. Go for it.Writing quality 9/10Character design 8/10World Background 5/10 (Realism)Plot development 9/10Face slapping 5/10Op MC 6/10Interesting element in story 8/10Smart MC 8/10Cruel MC ? 4/10Game element 7.5/10Love ❤️ yet till ch 150 Mc is a single dog.That doesn't mean I dropped it..... Just leaving a review for pet army.Enjoy ☺️ Peace ✌️
Interesting at first but after the novelty wears off its bland. This story depends too much on the "system". It provides almost everything, I do not even think the chef even cooks properly, it might also autocorrect mistakes... maybe.The main character is uninteresting, lazy, and should never have been the main character in the first place. His struggles are first world problems, he doesn't care, he is only a tool to "cook". Everything was spoon fed to him.The main enjoyment you will have here are the reactions and face slapping, but after that, you will start to see the problems. A junk food story, there is little development, background, or design to speak of but it scratches the itch.There is also a similar, basically in a different setting, story here albeit there are hundreds more yet to be translated.
Translator use chapter repeat to «farm» blatantly credits, too bad the story seemed interesting... I desabonned. Seems to happen a lot nowaday, hope the site do something about it... Report button maybe ?
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