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I read up to chapter 50 (the paywall) and it's really good so far I really want to read more but cannot justify spending that type of money on webnovel. so I guess I'm dropping here. I recommend this if you have the 20 something dollars to buy the rest of it.
Yes yes yes. Also, I do have to ask what this novel's name was in chinese.I loved the story and want more stories like this. For now. I'm waiting for more updates. I like this
The story is pretty good. I would definitely recommend it to some people. However, I’ve seen a lot of grammar errors. Especially the part with the word “you’re”. Instead of using “you’re” it uses “your”. But, it isn’t to the point where you can’t even read it. 8/10, would recommend. :)
Loved it, one of the best this week, please continue releasing fast fast fast...... 14000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000chaptersssssss!
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The story just contradicts itself when he gets back home. Their is just no common sense to this book later in the chapters. Sadly a good book has gone wrong in my opinion.
u still there...? this novel is good...welp cant really force you to make more chapters... imma wait ⊙▽⊙ O(∩_∩)O
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Needs a tonne of work, props to the author and I wish him/her the best of luck.I must say, the first chapter was imho, freaking terrible. It was all over the place, nonsensical mish mash of all the best stuff someone could think of for a modern day mc slapped together into an abomination called Michael.I seriously could not bring myself to read another chapter, I dont say this to discourage the author, it's hard to write! I understand that it isn't easy. This book needs some serious editing and the author needs to just sit and relax a bit, your mc never has to be the everything guy! The best things about characters in novels arent their perfections but their imperfections! All their flaws make them come alive and make your readers empathise with them through their journey! The best thing you can do for your audience is to make them always think about the qualities of our creations that resonate with them! Connecting with them makes your story stand out from the rest of the monotonous garbage that litters this app. You should (If you haven't already but suggesting by the hazardous writing that feels like its come straight from your head to being published) brain storm ideas, the direction you want to go, important antagonists and/or ideas for ones to come! Major turning points in your story that will affect your mc in major ways! These sort of plot points are needed so you can have some sort of direction to love in otherwise it becomes a mess, something that becomes harder to fix the longer you go. Never start the fillings before you've conquered your outline and outlook of where you want your story to go! You may not read this but I seriously hope this helps if you do kind regards
Writing Quality (Translation) ★• Translation is a good or even worst than MTLStory Development ★★• MC transmigrated to a world called "Blue Planet" where a game called "Heaven" has fallen upon them, there's a ranking system and of course the mc has no parents troupes..Character Design ★• The mc is very predictable, with no development, just him and his narcissistic self.. He even wanted his saber to call him "Big Brother" instead of "Master