I enjoy reading this one. It had a really nice and interesting plot line. I can see some typographical error but it's okay because It did not mess up with the story. Have a nice day ahead.
This.... is a very "meh" story.Plot: The main character can't really decide on a clear, long term goal, even by chapter 30+. It doesn't need to be super realistic, any goal is a good one.Translation Quality: Readable, but the translator translates without much care to be honest. There was a joke referencing one of the character's names, and the translator didn't even bother explaining. It left the readers very confused, and looked poorly done.Character design: Meh. I mean, main character is like, "Let's slowly induce a change of character compared to old soul in this body!" Proceeds to do almost everything very different. "I'm going to treat my sister like a daughter!" Near constantly flirts with her (they aren't blood related though).Just.... an annoying read all around. The action scenes are very.... poor too, it's all a blur, and you can't even tell wtf is happening half the time. I can't tell if it's an author or translator issue. All I can say is, there are better stories out there, this one does not have my vote for next to be fully translated.
The author should be penalised for this kind of behaviour. He has hundreds of fans waiting for various novels that he never updated or bothers finishing.
I don't think my review will stay here long as this author most likely deletes reviews based on comments, quality, and boosted ratings...Anyways I think the novel had a really good start, however it quickly devolves into cliche plots, forced and flat relations, and dumb decisions. Since C5ish the novel went downhill. The grammar is good however the story quality has a noticable drop. I ended up dropping this novel at C19 due to that. It sort of felt like the author tried to force cliche and/or cringe things as an original which did not work... Overall, author I think you need to focus on developing your story flow/plot and characters.Lastly I love the cover, plus the updates look daily, though I can only guess since on phone so cant see history.
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I implore you to atleast read till chapter 50things happen for a reason, there is an underlying plot behind everything?dun be too quick to judge, I don't wanna hint at anything because it would be too spoiler-y ?and mc is the type that goes through some serious character developmentall in all, an awesome read I know where my power stones are going for a long time
So, as an enthusiastic reader of this work, i wanna support the author by reviewing his work as he had requested for it from us. ?Although this work deserves a solid 5 star, I don't want to make the author very happy by giving him that. My reason is because of some flaws which I would explain below. Now, my rating goes thus:Writing quality: ? ? ? ?I gave 4 out of 5 stars because of there are few grammatical and spelling errors in the story. With some little edits, these would disappear. However, the errors and mistakes that one would find wouldn't shatter one's submersion into the story. Updating stability: ? ? ? ? ? I gave these 5/ 5 stars because author updates everyday. Also, he could give mass release of 4-5 chapters whenever he's in the mood. XD.Story Development: ? ? ? ?? This deserve a solid 5 star. Why? Because I love how the story is unfolding. It's entertaining and at the same time, unpredictable. Also, it is shrouded in mysteries, making it more enthralling. I am really enjoying the story progression and would defo continue to read until the end. Now, unlike some fantasy-cultivation books that have tons of cliches, making them boring and predictable, this book doesn't have cliches. No arrogant young masters and so on, if you get me. ?For the Cultivation aspect of the story: the Cultivation system that this story uses is truly unique. One could cultivate many realm-energies by comprehending them and harmonizing with them, becoming one with them. I like how the author made MC cultivates many energies that bestowed him with the power to manipulate and control fire and heat, ice and frost, wind and storm and many more. But what made me more exhilarated about the story were the energies never before seen in any cultivation book. So as examples, radiantforce energy which gave him the power to control light, strengthforce energy which gave him the power of Strength and Might, phantasmforce energy which gave him the power of Illusion. There are just so many to list. However, I would stop here. XD.And, another thing that excites me about this story is how the MC possesses tons of battle-physiques [all because of some good reasons which I wouldn't mention here]. These physiques allow him to battle cultivators that are higher in rank than him. However, he must slay his opponents or challengers in a minute, or he would become weakened by any of the physiques and get killed. Actually, he becomes weakened by them because the power of the physiques aren't supposed to be available to him yet. They are tremendous for him to handle and utilize. So, whenever he summons any of them, he experiences severe headaches, intense body pains and extreme fatigue. Therefore, he must eliminate his opponents before he blacks out due to the agonizing pain and splitting headache that he would suffer from using the powerful physiques. So all these that I stated was what made me love the story the more.Character design: ? ? ? ? I will give this 4/5 stars.My rating for this is because, in the beginning chapters of the story, MC was naive and kinda annoying. Also, he was a wimp. Anyways, this was because he actually hadn't stepped out of his uncle's mansion for long. So, he didn't really relate with other people other than his uncle, the maids and workers in the mansion who he had grown accustomed to. But stepping out of his uncle's mansion to hone himself in battle, he quickly became my favorite. The MC who is smart and intelligent quickly got used to how the Cultivation world works. So as the story progressed, I got to love MC the more because he did things that made me happy. I don't know about other readers and what they may think, but I would speak for myself. This MC is one of the best MCs that I have ever come across. I am currently at chapter 160 and I don't yet have a problem with the MC yet. How cool and amazing is that? Also, don't forget that this is an HAREM novel, but this MC doesn't think with his dick. However, he is an admirer of beauties, but who actually isn't???? So the MC's attributes include: smart, adorable, intelligent, generous, cool, then fierce and fearsome in the way that he fights, ruthless as he has killed a lot of cultivators that tried to harm him, daring and super fucking adventurous as he had struggled against high-rank cultivators for cultivation resources, artifacts and treasures. Can you imagine that? So crazy. Haha.World background: ? ? ? ? ? This surely deserves a solid 5 star. Author really took his time to describe the world well, and everything in it. Note: when you start reading, you may find author explaining stuffs. But these stuffs aren't random useless stuffs, they are actually useful elements in his story. I guess that's just his way of writing which I feel is Descriptive/ expository writing. However, this won't break your immersion. I promise. ? Summary: Story is very enjoyable and exhilarating as there are lot of plot twists and stuffs that would excite and delight you. So, I would suggest that you check it out. You would definitely not be disappointed. And if you are, well... then you are looking for something else that isn't in this story. ?Author-San, thanks so much for this work. ? Do keep updating. ?✌️