Awesome story... I love it love it love it love it....Keep it up author.. you are lovely.. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Flaw after flaw and cliche after cliche
MC has ez system but still can't sit in one place and get strong enough not to be squashed first before moving.
Unnecessary, unrealistic chats bw people.
Says one thing to do or not do but slaps himself in the face next chapter.
Very first example - Huang city was massive and has loads a low lvl body cultivator but it didn't have any low level hunting ground nearby ? Is it logically posible that sooo many people unnecessary live in a town where they won't earn ? Nop writing by making shopkeeper and such characters act arrogant in front of hunters not realistic (just from firsttown some )
Same kept repeating later i tried to get into some more and just some more chaps but these common sense holes don't stop[img=faceslap]
The story is nice and fun to read. It doesn't have many characters introduced so far which makes it easy to know who's who. The main character is interesting, sort of relatable with his wacky traits.
The MC's lovers which contain 3 primary waifu's, are all different from each other, with different origins, although not too spectacular or interesting it's believable. Chen Wentian also got 5 secondary waifu's, but they're pretty basic tbh.
One problem would be that while the MC is pretty strong considering he is an Immortal he doesn't experience breakthroughs whatsoever, well from how far I've read. The waifu's though have been going through their cultivation like a breeze.
Another might be how there doesn't seem to be much backstory about the MC but that might just make it too similar to most other novels that go through the whole cultivate from the bottom. It would be better if the MC is just hiding his powers but is lowkey the strongest in the Realm, but of course he doesn't flaunt it.
Besides that the novel is once again a nice read, as it's relatively different from most novels I've read from this site.
I deter harem the most, because it's what that drags down the novel itself. Most stories with a harem will turn out to be ribbish, regardless of how good the concept of the story is. Also, it's usually very cliche and irritating, making readers annoyed.
nice story. better than the novels in same genre.one player in each country is a great twist. i like intelligent protagonist in this story who does not brainlessly give away everything. pls update more chapter.
They summary sounds interesting and even with nationalism and racism at this point I'm used to still might be good and would like to know what he teaches them and how knowledge spreads
idk what to expect hopefully its good heheehehe word count but maybe itll be good for time pass and yeah let me type until word count allows it how has everyones day been?
the concept is interesting NGL....
But I don't have my hopes up since it's listed in trial read
And no trial read are good these days *sob* *sob*
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Story is good so far, just that most sentences needs to be reworded or fixing, since some sentences doesn't really make sense. You dont know what they are talking about or it's like jibberish since your unsure what's going on.
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
A quick spoiler-free review, as someone who preread the first 25 chapters. You will not be disappointed with this novel. If you enjoyed Rwtss, Elyon's work, or the fantasy genre that includes unique twists with reincarnation you will not be disappointed. The book has many similar elements to the author's past works and the world-building, description, character development, and urge to "READ MORE" is done wonderfully. Try this book out if your looking for a story that strays from typical tropes and creates a wonderful new world you can imagine inside your head.