Is good, I liked
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from this batch this is definitely the best one at least i feel that personally i would say its worth a past time read since you get some interesting stuff with most of the emulator genre.
I love this story! It is like a typical Xianxia, but with a few twists to make it more enjoyable for a western audience. It has far less filler, with chapter 82 correlating to around chapter 400 in a typical Xianxia, and the world seems relatively well thought out, it is clear that there are more details about the world that aren't being told to avoid an overly large info dump, but it doesn't feel like the Author ever pulls things out of his ass.
There are a few downsides typical to web novels, the grammar is pretty good but not professional quality by any means, and the characters aren't really well fleshed out (still better than a typical web novel).
Ultimately I would recommend this story to anyone who likes Xianxia stories, as it feels like a well-executed no-fluff Xianxia with a western twist.
I like this one, is funny and interesting. Hopefully this gets picked.
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Amazing, one of the best novel I've read recently... been looking for novel where game powers transfer to the real world with a OP MC its cool, MC is OP but to a reasonable extent
The grammar was extremely good, have a decent and unique storyline, and the story was well explained so guys you could try this book, it might suit your taste
This is the best original i have read so far, and i read a lot. The fast few chapters are short and mc & the world may seem lifeless, robotic. But after joining the academy everything turned out to be so much great. There is no cliche what you will find in other novels. The only regret i can find author rushed things in the academy life. But now he have slow down the pace. and thats great. we want to enjoy the world he lives in, not only to know what he does. I just hope there won't be a harem or one young master after another popping out of nowhere.
It's realllllllllllllly good, I hope I can see more chapters☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
I can get in to this book because it just doesn’t make sense
I have to assume this is just bad translation quality
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Well there nothing much to review here but u know i like mc but u can make it lighter if u not put the twise too much in the beginning, i think if u put there then itll be very long story but that good if u can make daily release... I'll gave u these score but they aren't final so keep improve i like ur story
[Review after reading 11 chapters]
This actually isn't too bad in its own genre.
The premise itself is a bit generic, but the way it's got to it is something I thought was unique.
The grammar is weird sometimes, sentence structure could be better and the strangest thing I noticed was that the storytelling voice, the narration, sometimes dips into the extreme casual.
And it sometimes treats the reader as if he were stupid and also, the story is full of exposition, just telling us 'This is how it is' instead of trying to use another method of convey this information.
Story-wise I have only a few complaints, which have may have been resolved in the next twenty other chapters I haven't read.
!SPOILERS!
This is, to me, the weirdest thing.
This is the third and last attempt that Rishi, the MC, has to pass the exam to get a Book of Contracts. He's hurt and instead of trying to get healthy before attempting the exam, he just rushes in. Why?
Rishi himself was surprised when he found out that he was healed when he was teleported into the exam arena.
So, I assumed that he didn't know, or wasn't sure that he would be.
Why is he rushing so hard to get it done, even while hurt?
And secondly, there doesn't seem to be a downside to the two types of contracts one can have with a beast when choosing the servant variety.
You could be normal friends with your beast, just as with the partner one, but still have the servant one chosen, so that it cannot leave or disobey you.
well i have been reading it for some time but Gradually begin to loose interest , i don't know the exact reason just that the story has become a little less engaging , maybe you can try to polish the revenge element more , try some more lemons or just some better character development