Its a amazing book the grammars not Perfect at times and some of the characters and development are kind of stupid but other than that i woul Highly recommend This book.
It's kinda like Monster Musume(?), but more mature and solve certain issue with interspecies relationship. It's quite enjoyable and wholesome at point. There are some nice fan services involved, what more do you want? Read it and enjoy.
K, I am truly impressed by this novel. it was an amazing story line! the more chapters I read, the more interesting and amazing the story gets. the more story progresses the better it gets. yes while reading it feels like the chapters are short and in one chapter you read nothing which make you wanna read more and more chapters in less time.By that, I don't mean that the author pulls his story, no. it has an amazing pace. everything in this story, by my opinion, has happened for a reason. sooner or later, you know the reason why it happened. Good work, author. Keep producing more chapters. thank you.
I really feel good when I read your writing ❤️.I wish you best wishes.You deserve it sneha ?. keep shining ? miss Sunshine , your novel really got something ?
First the Progression is all screwed up in this novel, it takes the players 2 hours from the beginning village to the first dungeon... no gamer would walk a realistic 2 hours to get to a dungeon. Just absurd travel distances. Then the progression is very off, from the very first chapters we find you can get to lvl 500, so why are goblins 20000 hp at lvl 20? it took 2-3 mins for each goblin for the mc which has far more damage numbers then an equivalent lvl player. so it would take 5+ min to finish off a basic goblin at lvl 20... dude a vast majority of gamers dont have that much time on their hands from your own words. So there is no way they would grind for 5 min per goblin. Even in a party you have to take into account the exp you would get, even if it would be faster to kill a single gob in a party youd barely get exp for your efforts. Besides those major points the characters are okay.updates pretty fast.The world is your generic wealth disparity society, so nothing really new or amazing.Grammer is good, sentence structure is good as well.Slow novel that is generic and needs improvement.
Menuda estupidez, la gente que pone 5 estrellas es obviamente para vacilar al autor, si es que se le puede llamar así, en definitiva, historia: 0, personajes: inexistentes, una completa basura
Wow I love the simplicity in the novel. It's so interesting and fun to read though it's so short would love if they would be a longer version.
I really like the book but it definitely could use a better story plot after the first 30 or so chapters. I also think the updating should be a lot more stable especially when you are doing online books. I mean it's been 10 months since it's been updated and to be perfectly honest with the current state of the book it's not worth it to spend coins on it until it gets updated with at least 50 more chapters at the minimum. Now, no I'm not hating on the author or the book but from a realistic standpoint it's not worth it
Very good so far. i like how the mc is thinking things through and isnt doing things without thinking about the consequences. :) keep up the great work.????
I couldn't read past the third chapter. This novel is a trashy one. The grammar is horrible...............,...........................................................
So far, the story is really enjoyable so far, with the characters seeming real and the world building is the best I have ever seen on webnovel.
The book and the story itself is just great! I know I've said it before but it's really a good book/story! I love how different they are to each other and you can easily distinguish the likes of it. Keep it up! Lovelots, Cie??❤❤