There's not much for me to, just some concern about the MC's system. When I think about it, there's no need for the MC to work hard, he can just invest and invest then he'll get 10x rebate. That's why I'm hoping for the author to give a proper limitation its benefits. Moreover, in perspective, not all people are that easygoing. That they would help someone just by knowing their name or something, but I might be wrong. Maybe there's some hidden agenda or whatnot. Anyway, it's a good read.
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I really hate it when people are judgmental of a story within the chapter comments of a story, so I am really glad to see that the people commenting seem to be casual internet trolls rather than self-employed pro-USA water army members. Webnovels are for enjoying, not for people to yell at each other over cultural differences.
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Hi guys. author here. hope everyone is enjoying the story. im just happy to finally be able to wright the world that i created. i really hope that everyone will share this journey with me andcmy characters
No real complaints here. I enjoy the story, and characters so far. The only real consistent issues I've seen are the author's troubles with subject-verb agreement and that they don't refer to who's speaking often enough. Other than those two quirks though, solid novel. I'm a fan of vampires so I'm interested to see where this goes. Keep it up, author!
hm... where should i start, so the characters, the worldbuilding is just perfect to my taste. That said, this webnovel gives me real demon slayer vibes. And author, if you're reading this review, give us a few more chapters, I beg you. Pleeeaaaseee
Hohoho... From the start I knew this was going to be a good novel. What can I say... It is very Subarashiiii hehehe... The dialogues make my blood boil, and I have to say... The ones to speak their words are geniuses to say such wonderful worlds muhahahaha (No, I'm not praising you, author. I'm praising the characters...)
Can't stop reading it. More please...........................................................................................................
AND HERE I WAS SHOCKED THAT THIS STORY WAS GIVEN ONLY WITH 1.9 RATINGS! THIS STORY IS MAGNIFICENT BUT THERE ARE SHAMLESS THIEVES IN THE WORLDDDD!!DELETEEEEEEEEE!!!!
Just an examination of the writer's style.There's a frequent lack or overuse of punctuation that makes sentences flow awkwardly. The author's sentence structuring and wording, in general, can also create a strange read at times.However, grammatical errors are minimal, and to give credit where credit's due, the Author has an exceptional vocabulary and word sense. This prevents them from overdoing one of my biggest irks with novels on the site, rapidly overusing the same words in a small area of text.An example of what I mean would be, "The other boys were going to attack but the leader stood up gesturing to not attack." This example was ripped straight out of a fairly popular novel.
You might think this is your run on the mill reincarnation novel. You couldnt be more wrong. It's well written, characters are engaging, cute, and funny to boot.If you are looking for a fun story you came to the right place. Read it, you won't be disappointed.