Several days passed and somehow the situation had mellowed. Xue Jinxu had been given her brother the cold shoulder and it was worrying him, but people around him including Chen Linyun and Butler Lee had given advice to let it be in the moment.
"Eh?" She opened her eyes again. Memories from the night before came to her. "Oh, right. Sorry."
'Snap' Leo snapped his fingers prompting Marco to come forward placing a file before Archie as he withdrew back to his seat. As she flipped through the files before her, she could hear Leo saying, "There is one thing I need you to do for me immediately and it involves the future of the family and I hope you can see to it as quickly as possible".
Everyone cheered as they were happy to go on a 'Holiday'
"Pei Nan! Put me down. People are looking." She looked to the left and then the right. Thankfully only a few maids were present. But they all looked down from embarrassment.
...Fifteen minutes later...
Dunno how i got so far. Anyway1st few chapter wallbreaking is ultra retarded - RETARDEDThe system apparently has a lot of options and they are only visible when MC DECIDES TO ENABLE THEM, and he only does so when he feels like or "he remembered"... As story progresses he keeps enabling more options that display rank and some other shit. why not enable everything? - pretty retardedMC is hunting sticks nonstop. All of a sudden 2 sticks appear, guess what MC does? HE SPEAKS TO THEM "Who are you?" LIKE WTF? DUDE u have been hunting sticks nonstop for so long and all of a sudden YOU FUCKIGN randomly decide to talk to them? (Reason he talked was because of the plot, he obv needed to talk to them...) - RetardedMC has like 10-20 skills. Right before "dying" HE REMEMBERED he had an OP skill that transforms all dmg taken to 1 hp. Yeah... he just remembered at the crucial time, and guess what, all the other skills were explained, but when this1 was mentioned, we never got to see what it does, and behold a couple of chapters later, HE REMEMBERS it and uses it in a crucial moment and readers go "WOOW, HE HAD SUCH A SKILL" well done author, that was retarded suspense. - RETARDEDMC sees an S grade (that should have -500 ish hp, but apparently still had a couple of hp somehow left) stick being killed by a stronger stick and he goes "w-w-w-who are you?" ... - RETARDEDMC meet Hiersomething, 10 minutes later blabs his secrets to her, how he is reincarnated etc - RETARDEDWhen MC decides to blabber his secret about being blessed by the goddess, mc asks the question back and then MC SAYS- "Lets say our answers at the same time" LIKE FUCKING little kids, god i cringed so hard while reading that.MC has major brain problems, constantly forgetting stuff, making irrational choices. The goddess brainfucking and changing things however she likes doesn't help the plot or the MC, he is retarded and stays retarded for as long as i have read - RETARDEDMC fights in a trial, 1st trial-10 rounds, half the them finished in one shot, the other half is explained as them all attacking using this and that, MC dodges! Use abilities and beats them. blah blah blah. 1st trial finished in 4 HOURS! 4 HOURS? THAT was maximum 30min. Apparently somewhere it was explained that sticks fight at a slower pace, but when the fights happen u CANT fucking tell that, fights are explained as all enemies can attack MC at the same time which means they are close or can move closer fast. anyway, it took 4hours apparently, insanity. -RETARDEDINHERITANCE obtained, MC has a full room of skills to BROWSE THROUGH, what does he do? takes the 2 skills he was there for originally and HE EXITS THE INHERITANCE and goes with the leader back to the alliance. EVEN THOUGH THERE WERE WHO KNOWS HOW MANY GOOD SKILLS. AAAND DOESN'T GO back there for a LONG time, and when he DOES, its again to LOOK FOR SPECIFIC SKILLS, he doesnt fucking look at all the skills and think if they are usefull, HE DOESNT even pick the passive skills that he shouldnt even worry about -RETARDEDFrom now on i guess spoiler warning?MC gets a skill fusion option from his system. STILL DOESNT GO TO INHERITANCE TO LEARN ALL THE SKILLS AND FUSE AND FUSE THEM FOR OP RESULTS. - RETARDEDOh right MC makes a clone. Makes it look like his old life... (yeah, he made him look the same as how he was instead of making him more handsome, or ANYTHING. EXCEPT. He increased his "drill" size. . . Yeah, author called his dick a drill and some other retarded name, my brain thankfully decided to erase at least 1 of them from my brain... But yeah, gotta increase dicks size but the rest stays the same. I mean how fucking boring is that, when u get a new life why tf would u want to look the same as you did., then again compared to all the other shit this is more just in my opinion.The big fight against the wolf stick. Oh god, it was written so badly, so cringe. the tactics so cringe, i couldn't bear to read them so i was skipping and skimming chapters. Dropped it at the point MC was showing off his awesomeness to EVERYONE around, yeah that's supposed to be the "climax
Chinese racism never fails to cool my interest in a series.There's nothing done to change Wei Wei's bone structure, her sink is just brown. Yet, she's considered ugly with dark skin and beautiful with pale skin. Is this why skin bleaching is so popular in China? This cancerous logic can only produce self hating people and a false sense of superiority.
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early review, ch. 47critique first: --infrequently, you may find a typo or slight grammar mistakes. part in parcel with enjoying webnovels--sometimes the mc feels like she speaks more eloquently than the plot should allow, but not a major plot hole why it's good:--mc goes through some very major trauma starting at 10 years of age. none of it is s--ual, yet it's still possibly a trigger warning for parents or folks with rough childhoods. if you can get past some of the rough bits, you start to really get a sense of the psychological depth of the characters early on in the story. their healing and progress makes sense and feels real. overall, I it is a novel that I think shows a lot of potential to help someone who might be struggling. --the main characters struggle is very unique, but is also entirely believable. not corners cut, no dice rolls (probably). everyone is clearly planned and well thought out. --fast paced. there seems to be a system involved, but so far it feels more believable than some far-fetched soul-ai. hope this helps gather some support. :) the world seems a better place for the story so far
Hello, I’m Orcleon, this book’s author. Welcome to my third book and third journey.I won’t bore you with theatrics and immediately tell you what you might expect;•A cultivation path of power that has somewhat cliche roots at the start but rapidly becomes its own unique thing.•Vast world building and active plot. Expect the story to be long and there to be multiple mysteries that’ll take time to unveil.•A relatively overpowered and neutral main character with a real personality that’ll face adversity and will continuously grow. The mc will not be a robot.~>If there are any points I forgot to mention, feel free to ask in these comments, I answer to everything.<~> Hopefully you like my book and its universe, have fun!
I hope that this novel will be good. Your other novel is fantastic and is also a harem novel. So the harem in this novel will probably turn out great with all the experience you have.I don't have much more to say except that I hope that there will be as little science as possible in the novel.