PotentVenom
good story, it's just very annoying that the MC is referred to as Qin Tian all the time even though he should actually be Oscar, especially when everyone else has German names or when others address him as Oscar. That seems to alienate the MC from the story.Can it maybe be changed?
The writing quality is truly solid. The power progression is neat. Need more smut tho like lots more. But that’s just me. Please don’t drop this book
A kingdom building novel that written purely on author's imagination with little or no researching and logical thinking.MC'S 260 IQ gives me some thought that I might have over 9000 IQ myself. He knows nothing. He did loads of stupid, naive and illogical thing without consequences followed. Other characters are bad too, no dimension at all.The technologies are meh and mess up. The technologies development in another world can be different, and the differences must have logical reason to them. The land without a known natural resources is one of the biggest city in a kingdom. That city is old enough for farmers to plant crops until the soil is not fertile anymore, but secret mines are never run out. They feed millions of their citizen by growing crop without using any farming tool or fertilizer at all, how?
"Pfft ... yeah it's a pretty funny joke right Doc."
So, after a long and needed silence I 'wake up' and turn up to see Haru smiling down at me. "Well hello, there sleeping beauty, nice of you to join us." He looked down at me with his goofy smile and I looked back a little worried...
*bagon* Argo speed and attack was strengthen again
"Well, wherever you go, don't think you can't come back."
The groups took steps outside the landing area, their eyes could not stay still in one direction. As they walked, only the chirp of wild birds and occasional sounds of animals can reach their ears. This was blending with their footsteps against the road that was littered with pebbles.
So what's wrong with taking the back streets?
Only shooting stars
Hey now, you're a rock star, get the show, on get paid
She was looking kind of dumb with her finger and her thumb
