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it's excellent...... I love the setting of the story and i also liked that you didn't make the mc op in a single chapter and the romance is also quite good so that it won't hinder the pace of action later
Although it is not my type of story, it was very well written. I read 2 chapters only and didn't hook, but it really is because I don't like this type of story. The plot has a lot of potential from what I read, and the mystery will keep most readers on the edge of their seat, waiting for more :)
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Soo I have read for quite a bit. Am gonna drop bcz it doesn't fit to my taste that much. The author is doing pretty well on his writing quality and I like how the novel uses an interesting premise for the apocalypse. I also like how the mc doesn't immediately trust the system like so many other main characters from other webnovels and how he can think logically. However I don't like how the author is going about the MC's feelings about Nicole it's like the author changed his mind about Nicole being just a disposable to make her a potential love interest. The author also tries to cover this up by say that the MC was just fooling himself. There's a lot more but I would rate it at least 3.5 compared to the other webnovels I have read on the platform which makes me lose brain cells. Tell me if I made a mistake in my review
Add this 5 star review to be helpful to new readers. As well as to make it up to ten. Well here is the review, a nice read and a refreshing take on the genre. It was refreshing to my taste and a cut above the rest of a sea of fantasy novels. I hope it gets more exposure to have more readers in the future. Good luck and I'm from review swap, hope you check mine too!
Great book but u need to work more on character discription such as facial colaur of eyes personality behaviour and can u use different coloured or different brackets for each character so asto make it easy to understand.Also I think you can add more mysterious theme, missions, a setof group of friends ,hidden treasuresFriends to mcand suchFrom -A fan of your workYou can look forward to these series to get an idea for further developmentIn another world with a smart phone.
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I adore this writing and the character development is great. I get anxious when I've finished the published work and have to wait for the next chapter!
Boring.. no comedy / romance .. author didn't use many opportunities to bring a little flavor to the novel.. mostly bland with political undertones .. which are showcased in verbose paras.. not intriguing incidents this novel is something for the readers to keep going through the boring chapters .. but translation is good
Really like it, probably one of the best I have seen in trial read, very realistic too and it gives an explanation for everything instead of just saying "it works because it's magic"