"I know pumpkin, but it just ain't my thing, plus it's not like you have anything I've never seen before".
Tian Chan Ge tightened his mouth, uncomfortable about the words she said. Was it so easy to say those words?
Primero que nada esta bien tu primer capitulo, pero necesitas pulirlo un poco por ejemplo: los diálogos, los pensamientos y la descripción están todos juntos lo que hace difícil la lectura y confusa. Te recomiendo que mejores eso.....si de verdad continuaras escribiendo. Y de paso leete la mi.
But on the bright side, he didn't even once get heart attacks after Kurama covered his heart with its chakra...But Kurama said it's tempory, and he is building the immunity against it...Kurama chakra will lose it's effect soon enough and his bloodline ability will be unstable, that is if he ever manages to get out of this torture...
"The answer will not be simple, so do think about it. You have several years, so I hope you don't disappoint me with your answers. Now the two main rules of this new life are simple. One, you are not allowed to make major deviations to your current life from your previous one. Though we can make exceptions if you complete the trials, I give you. Second, you cannot tell anyone that you have reincarnated. Though I doubt most people will ever believe, there are three other people I am also observing, and you telling them may present a problem in their trials."
He then took off his armour and gave it to Eumaeus and Philoetius, who went straight on to the house, while he turned off into the vineyard to make trial of his father. As he went down into the great orchard, he did not see Dolius, nor any of his sons nor of the other bondsmen, for they were all gathering thorns to make a fence for the vineyard, at the place where the old man had told them; he therefore found his father alone, hoeing a vine. He had on a dirty old shirt, patched and very shabby; his legs were bound round with thongs of oxhide to save him from the brambles, and he also wore sleeves of leather; he had a goat skin cap on his head, and was looking very woe-begone. When Ulysses saw him so worn, so old and full of sorrow, he stood still under a tall pear tree and began to weep. He doubted whether to embrace him, kiss him, and tell him all about his having come home, or whether he should first question him and see what he would say. In the end he deemed it best to be crafty with him, so in this mind he went up to his father, who was bending down and digging about a plant.
"Whatever, let's go into the bandits hideout." Alodar ignored most of what Temporal said, but he at least heard about the part of Fletcher being his ancestor.
Devourer lv 1
Oh well I am sure I find out later about it
...why
Ability: Royal Wakizashi
Rias: A…ke...no...