I'm absolutely addicted to this ongoing WebNovel! The author's writing is so descriptive that I feel like I'm right there in the story with the characters. The world-building is so well-crafted and the characters are so relatable that I'm emotionally invested in their journeys. I can't wait to see how this story ends and I highly recommend it to anyone who loves an ongoing read!
As per author request, here is my review. Overall the story progress nicely. The growth rate of MC on the slow side(strength wise), other growth such as earning and skills are in moderate range. In MC growth department, overall in an acceptable range. The only drawback is the release rate of the chapter is a bit too slow. It's to the point that I almost forget about the story plot. But I do understand if the author has some difficulty as we are all human and this is not a serious paying job for the author. Thanks for your sharing spirit. This is my review for now if you need more just let me know.
A very interesting story so far! I really enjoy the dynamic between the male and female lead. Joshua is a "mad scientist"-type guy who loves tinkering and coming up with all sorts of ideas just for the sake of it; while Catherine is a more down-to-earth, but ambitious person. It's often hard to tell who is the realist or the idealist in this partnership, which only makes it more interesting. It also never feels like one is clearly superior and could work on their own, as they complement each other.
Speaking of Joshua, it's rare to find a good web novel where the MC plays a supporting role. Even rarer is an actually interesting plot with some intrigue and nuance rather than a brawl-fest where power trumps all. Catherine is already making progress towards her goals by building allies and thinking about the big picture (while simultaneously trying to deal with a complicated scheme against her), so I hope this carries on.
One complaint I have is that Joshua feels like too much of a caricature right now. Sure, he got to say his goodbyes, and I can understand that his eccentricity is also a coping mechanism. Still, the guy died not too long ago and now finds himself in a completely unfamiliar world, forced to fulfill a role he never agreed to. I just can't see him coming to terms with the situation that easily. Plus, he should have unexplored sides to him and room to grow as a person, so I hope to see some development later on to make him more human and interesting.
Now comes the elephant in the room: the writing. It's passable for the most part, but the punctuation and paragraph structure need some work. Commas are sometimes abused (or not used when they should be) to make sentences way too long. Combined with the occasional gigantic paragraph, this can make the reading experience very frustrating. They're not too difficult to fix, though: make more liberal use of periods, colons, and semicolons to break things up; and try keeping paragraphs to at most 5-6 lines.
All in all, this has some serious potential, so I'm looking forward to the next chapters.
yeah the the type of mc that would "coincidentally" be in an area that a villain would appear.. like bruh!! its only chapter 15 and there are many bs
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The First 40 Chapters are too monotone. The MC is too hard headed with basically no character development. He just foolishly trying to cross floors with no focus on character. Lets just get through floors like its nothing.
The story started off ok until he was "reborn". It has a lot of inconsistencies. The MC seems know information that wasn't stated prior like people being able to give skills and so on. It honestly just got confusing and felt really rushed at points.
An intriguing blend of magic, mystery and murder set in Victorian England. The protagonist is initially your abandoned talentless orphan, struggling to survive in a world where musicians dominate the magic society. Rapidly caught up in a web of intrigue, he searches for his heritage as Easterner in a world where King Arthur mythos has morphed into madness-stricken royalty, rebellious nobles and hidden powers pulling spuppet trings. The author has cleverly blended the characters of Sherlock Holmes, famous musical composers and shades of Chuthulu into a detective story which is distinctly different from the traditional sword and magic storytelling. Whilst character development is still somewhat a one-dimensional path of orphan to overload with budding romance subplots, it is still worth a read, if only for the novelty of a different genre.
Nice story, and i would like to say it was a pretty good read and i was glued to the screen my entire time. Hope to see more future updates.
The grammar makes me want to die. Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!! It’s so bad!!! Arghhhh!!! I’ve lost one million brain cells and I’m a potato!
Very good idea but it can be seen that he is armature writer but keep improving and leave less loophole................................................................................................................................................................
Bro......This story is breathtaking. I loved it so much.