The mc is incredibly ignorant and the story feels too forced. Some how the Heavenly Dao is unable to broadcast to the whole planet and everyone but the mc is in range of the heavenly Dao. Even though heavenly Dao couldn't broadcast to mc it could still send the rewards? Good luck.
A good start, found it interesting. Then the author got hit on the head by a flying pig. We get Beasts attracted to the MC. Then we get MC becoming a body cultivator. Then we get MC. All the while, losing the Attractiveness System. It's like playing a MOBA game then suddenly you're playing a Music game, then it changes to a text-based novel game even before completing a level. The shift in story lore Nd background is very disturbing. Very hard to keep track of what is happening. The author might have been going for Inception style of writing, or something like Dr. Strange. Just doesn't go well in writing.
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Author here to let the new readers understand what to expect:1)Basic info about the MC: With bad luck following him everywhere, he had no choice but to develop a rather carefree attitude, of course, this was also due to the trust in his skills.NO, this isn't a harem :/ :/ :/2)I'm definitely learning and getting better everyday. The style in the first 3-4 chapters may seem a bit all over the place.I would ask you to stick around and give it a try regardless.3)The novel may seem fast-paced but that's only due to the world of Genesis being extremely vast.4)Of course, since this is my first time doing this, it's natural I make mistakes but I go through the work multiple times before posting it so if there's still any mistake, it'll only be minor grammatical errors.(which isn't excusable but it's better than story-line errors)Thank you for reading and Bad luck FTW!
Hold up....I could have sworn I read another trial novel with the exact same plot and system... whats going on here?????Are they just copy pasting novels now?
well I promised after 10 chapters I would give a true review so here it is. This is so far a great story the MC is well made and relatible so far and I doubt he will be op anytime soon. His power and skills sound reasonable. The first boss sounds like something I would love to fight myself and hints at the idea of hidden blood lines/abilities. so I can't wait to see what happens next keep up the good work.
A beautiful and Interesting read indeed. i am liking he way story is in process .Just hop in u won't drop the book halfway.Please give us more chapters
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really nice novel, even though it doesn't have many chapters.
i absolutly love the main character like he isn't extremly cold hearted but also not like "omg i need to impress every girl so i can build my own harem"
It's a interesting one, and a bit funny too....The author has to work on grammar use more and mistake can happen, so it’s alright... I don’t read this type of Sci - fi story that much, but this one is pretty good!! I hope the author can continue writing... Well done, keep it up!!!
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