Fooly89
Invincible..??
Yawn!? Louise could be so boring?why can't she just be like siesta and try adapt to their situation??
I need more chapters. It’s really interesting to read.
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TLDR: A harem and face smacking story that is unique enough to be enjoyable with the harem being written in a way that I like despite hating most harem stories. Mostly just hoping the author keeps that going and doesnt fall into the pit of making his entire story about the harem, as the power scaling and how the powers work is really interesting and deserves to be the focus.
Honestly speaking, this is a good story, and although harems usually irritate me, im willing to give this one a chance as it is handled a bit better than others. It's more like a Monarchy palace or seems to be, with one main girl and probably others kinda like concubines. At least that's what im kinda getting the vibe of, which I can deal with.
About the story itself, his system is interesting but not totally ridiculous (yet, as of chapter 24, which is all that's there for now), and the scenes are really enjoyable. There are a lot of questions that really just get swept up under the rug, but hopefully, those will be answered at some point later, so not really a negative.
One thing id like to see is that the story remains the focus and to request the author to keep the "Special" chapters as bonuses and not the point of the story, and the story itself is very well done and interesting.
I have a good feeling about the story, and I'll update my review if anything changes.
At first I started to read it to kill time but as the other characters introduced i was so hooked in the story that I binge read almost all chapters in one week and I love it you should definitely give it time and read it with patience up to 50chapter then you will know it's worth
I laughed, I cried, I raged, and I thoroughly enjoyed this book!! What a great read! Never going to look at a cucumber the same way ever again ...
The book is amazing. But why it’s incomplete ... im devastated!
It had me hooked within the first page, and it kept me going almost to the point where I am at now. So many abs and downs and twist and turns, making me think more than I really want to. I’m totally enjoying this book.
Beautiful story. I enjoyed reading it
Ethan is no better than Stephanie! He’s a loser and makes me wonder if he didn’t have nothing to do with Davis mother death! I’m still trying to figure out how they know Davis rape Stella! Who would had known unless the person behind the dirty evil deed! It’s been three years and why now!
Awesome couldn’t stop reading I loved it
