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Its a good yuri novel just wish there was more character development because sometimes I forget whos who and have to double check but it has lost of good moments 4 stars
I loved it most amazing, very good story the plot is also original and great, the interaction between the two characters is unique, very interesting and fun, I liked more of the protagonist's personality and from the butler, I highly recommend
So guys please leave a comment on what you think of the novel and if this is a novel that you will support. and know that this is a test to see if this type of story and Mc is wanted or not if not I will find another project to write I have a couple but this is the one I decided to test first.
Late review but here's a 5 star, I think you fairly deserve it as the book didn't fail to entertain me as a reader, plus the writing is great there's really nothing I can complain the book is amazingly done.
Honestly trash. It’s a good concept, but the main character is a gross pervert, and the story was completely ruined for me when Nine (a love interest) started watching other’s have $*x.
more please really potential here and a good idea for a fanfic
the translation, or english of the author( idk which it is but the way them words is written) is a bit broken and disjointed. otherwise a very good novel, the world is slowly getting fleshed out and I like that we only know as much as the MC there is no omnipotence or system so far and things are taking their time. also we start with a natural birth instead of a death or any other trope, so there are some light time skips early on, but they're sparse considering they could be done repeatedly. so over all good, just needs an editor!
A real romanceless romance that really resembles the typical low key sign in novels despite there being no signing in. Our protagonist gets assaulted by some generic demoness sect leader character.Since this is a Chinese novel he isn't mentally scarred or traumatised but instead just brushes it off while the sect leader apparently has some mixed feelings about this. This is weirdly messed up morally but fine, let's move on.Generic protagonist, generic cultivation system/world, generic characters and generic luck based cheat. While this novel does make me yawn unfortunately I've read more chapters of worse. This is essentially a spiritual successor to sign in novels but with a poorly thought out and currently non existent romance narrative to push the story.The part of this novel that resembles the low key sign in novels is mundane but I can kinda force myself to read it, it's not bad. The relationship with the sect master however is just tedious. I don't care for the morality of the characters have and the fact that the protagonist has no animosity or any kind of feeling in particular (besides fear) towards the sect master is just strange.Somewhat generic part sign in part detached romance with some translation errors (awkward and hard to understand wording). I do like the laid back, chill vibes of this novel though so although I've criticised this a lot, I don't hate it, I'm actually fairly biased towards it but I'm also a bit confounded. 2/5.
I like the way the story has developed even after reading for a klong time. The writer's point of view is interesting .While the writing quality is a bit down since there are a lot of grammar errors, but overall this is a story which is worth reading
If i could give less then 1 star I would.Thus novel went from quite good to litteral trash in 1 chapter. And by reading the comments I can tell its not just me who thinks that. If you are hesitating to read this book look at the comments on chapter 7.
Wow, I'm impressed with this novel! It's well written, well fleshed out when it comes to character progression. A fantastic novel loaded with suspense, lot of actions and above all the MC's personality is relatable to many. A great roller coaster ride is waiting for the MC, I'm rooting for him. I hope he finds Alison soon! A great read novel. I enjoyed reading it! Keep it up, Author!
Finally she came back I was going to die because of the important wait It would be annoying if Sophie was against Azurath you'd better be with him and John would be annoying too But out of emotion that someone goes back in time doesn't mean this is a time ramification I mean you have to know when Azurath was imprisoned and explain whether the writer will touch on the multiple crisis with that I think it would be annoying if he brought it in because it would be annoying because there will always be another possibility of going back in time but on the other hand shouldn't Azurath come back too because he has mastered the law of fate and space and maybe time too if he does not mean that he will see them as prophecies for the future that's what we'll see in the chapters Well What's wrong with waiting?
