Veldanava00
It's kind of funny, that both this and perfect run has such a low rank because there aren't many chapter's to read
Even tho I hate harems, I hope you realize how dumb your comment sounds
So it’s AI ok
Outside of time cultivation system is trash. Everybody knows the cultivation system is: qi condensation, foundation establishment, core formation nascent soul. You only have one core and one nascent soul, having more is already stupidly strong and heaven-defying. Also fusing them? Wtf is this sht.
Dropped.
I shall Seal the Heavens there's too much plot armor, the protagonist should have died like at the start of the novel. By chapter 200 he should have died like 30 times and 160 of these chapters were him running away.
Dropped.
Grand Ancestral bloodlines so much plot armor it makes the whole thing cringe.
Dropped.
What happened???from chapter 31 to 193 I liked the story
it's an alrite story to read and shut of yur brain to not much is really happening in it the kid gets in danger and gets rescued somehow
by her smartwatch her daddy got her that's it that's the whole premises of the story it's a mediocre try imho and slightly below average read the entire trial bit and daddy hasn't even shown his face yet :)
The MC grows up along the way, from a discouraged writer to encouraging others and providing them opportunities.
MC has a good character profile, he's not that arrogant and he truly has dedication to his work.
The MC learns as he goes and knows not to rest on his laurels. He also shares what he had learned and provides opportunities to those around him.
And the novel has less face-smacking than the usual of the same genre.
A standard storyline… loved every bit of it… Waiting for more updates…
It’s pretty but the main characters race is not explained in any way, he seems to just be a human and the ash part has nothing to do with his powers. Another huge problem is that he acts like the game characters are real, why would I care about some random npc.
The opening was just a banger and will hook you up into the story right from the start. The writings are super good and easy to follow. The pacing of the story is incredible and straightforward! Keep up the good work!All the best....
A good novel, 10/10 (except there's only five stars averaged) so maybe it's 30/30 stars based off the webnovel rating system. (please let my fellow pens go)
Wasn't this the same premise as the other scarecrow book last week?Definitely not complaining though, always down for more protagonists being monsters
