I'm gonna hit the bottom in 3...2...1.... ?BOOM?
The girl defenceless against such a powerful entity was stunned by his metal stick.
Arata glanced at the complaining Visha.
gggggggggooooooooooooooooooddddddddddddddddddd
Hi Mate, writing another review. Good reading during my lunch hour. Thanks so much for writing and Gooday. Love you all. That's my review. Bye. Also agree something should be done to the hair.
Hello, there, author. As promised, I'll give you brutally honest review.As I've said in the other day, you need to fix how you write the dialogue but I see no improvement.I mean, why you do you use "<" and ">" to separate the dialogues and paragraphs instead of ("Blas bla, bla.). Your story is good, but ruined by your ignorance to learn the proper writing techniques.good luck.
The synopsis sounded good but the FL does not act like anyone who’s been kidnapped and married off against her will. There are no true attempts at escape, struggle or even resistance which would make her more credible. Instead all she does is think about how good looking her kidnapper/captor is, although none of his actions indicate sincerity at this point. I get love stories starting from Stockholm syndrome on WN, but this FL isn’t acting like a princess who was taken against her wishes and made a forced bride. Or even a regular woman who’s been kidnapped.Still have hopes for the magic parts of the story though! But her reactions make the impending romance seem really insincere/contrived
Please don’t drop this till 1000 + chapters really good development so far!!!! Keep up the hard work
The novel is worth my time. Truly enjoyed the work. The plotline is humorously designed pertaining to schemes, adventure, cool dynamics, actions and mysteries. The concept is exciting and gives you wonderful experience! The characters are descriptively tailored with unique traits carrying individual importance. The dialogues are humorously incorporated and further adds in flavour to the plotline. The world building is well progressing as well. Nice work author! ?
best thing Is synopsis do not match content insidei am at chapter 62 and mc Is using gold coins And not points And Hes ONLY one with system rest Are just poor people trying to suvive.in content It says catastrophe started over 100 year And then there Are some 40 years people that remember times before ..Its some how luckluster but not terrible
Author here again: My bad for paywalling the book so early. I set it not knowing I'd be unable to change it due to the server I post from. Please don't be mad?. I really hope you'll bear with me on this and continue to read. Also if you got questions just let me know in the form of comments, I'll try to reply as quickly as possible
I loved the way author wrote this story especially the narrative style of the characters and their interactions. I haven't read a story which describes culture and traditions, it is evident that author has done a really good job. The writing quality,the plot build up everything about this story is awesome. Looking forward for more chapters. Keep up the good work author.