I've read the first chapter, and though this is only the start, the writing has drawn me in. The characters are realistic and the dialogue flows nicely! The story starts with a common narrative but I'm excited for how the author will continue. There could be some work with editing the chapter, since I noticed some grammar and punctuation mistakes but it didn't affect my quality of reading. I hope the author will update soon! ??
I love the start to this. The detail almost flows around you as it drags you under and into this world the author has created, like the rapids of a river. One thing I would say however is that it is slightly hard t understand sometimes when it comes to the dialogue.
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oh i just forgot to write a review to this one. .. this novel is good and the harem is nice, no one left or something like that. .. and im currently at chapter 382 or 362?
I made it to chapter 36. It's was okay at first, it was going for the typical op main character that never loses and that's fine but there was no real comedy, interesting world building or anything that made up the boring plot. The main character is copy and past template of others, his only redeeming factor is he is not as psychotic as he could be and isn't as thirsty as most mc's. I like some op mc novels but this isn't one of them
Love it! A Medical student, with a brain tumor. Diving, one last time he finds a system, with growth potential via work. Stick with it until chapter 10. Fast paced, an excellent read.
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I personally think the novel is great, it does take the first 2 chapters for it to get to the action but other then that I recommend this novel to everybody that enjoys only I level up or my vampire system. the author doesn't update everyday like most novels but his chapters are very lengthy which makes up for it. I love this novel and you should read to at least chapter 10 and decide if you wanna continue.
Hello my loyal readersThis is chapter 200 celebration reviewIt has been a hell of a journey throughout these short period .. nearly month and half since i started this story. I have now written 204 chapters to the moment and nearly 320k wordsI hope u liked my novel so farNow, i want to celebrate with you. So i need your suggestions about how to do that.Would you like me to write a side story? Pnro? Or another one related to the hidden mysteries to the novel?Do you want a mass release? 10 chapters in oneday perhaps?Just tell me what do you think and i will try to make your wishes come trueI will wait for one more week then i will tell you about the final rewards i chose from your suggestionsKeep supporting me and ibro, the journey has just begunHappy journey in my novel worldThx for your support so far, it means a alot to me.