Such an amazing story. keep it up writer. you're doing a great job ......
I love all your books ?
I am not a problem attached
The plot is amazing
3, 5 stars.
This novel revolves around the experiences and development of the main character and the eventual resolution of the world, as expected. It wasn't terrible, but I found myself skipping paragraphs and drifting off into other thoughts while reading.
While I did finish it and it was acceptable, I doubt I'll revisit it. It seemed to lack something that could have made it more engaging.
Decided to pen this review in response to the negative feedback. I can empathize with some aspects, but not all. The harem aspect might be deemed effortless and unrealistic, but that's a preference. Men do desire a group of women, after all, and the first volume caters to that fantasy for its intended audience. Critics calling harem content in youth-oriented novels a fulfillment of desires, please grow up. I'm sure your notion of a "normal" romance is also an idealized version from a virgin's perspective.
As for darkness, how dark were you expecting? Scenes involving rape, impregnation, or leaving with a smile? Or turning into a heartless killer, targeting anyone who dares to cross you? Such dark themes don't belong in a light novel.
Honestly, while I didn't think it was exceptional beyond the first volume, it wasn't the worst either.
Please provide your response in English; I will not provide a translation into Chinese.
So what i think from this novel :
1. This Novel has interesting world.
2. The characters development is a bit rushed in early chapter but i think it does get better.
3. The goals of main character is easier to understand.
4. To much fighting without intermezzo, i mean after he won a fight he go to another place and then fight again even if MC gain nothing from that fight.
5. Could've been better if author add some more chapters about MC guiding and deepening relationship with his people and friends. (It already have some but so stubble, like only few word or something)
6. There's some loose end in the story but i think author gonna explain it in latter chapter maybe
So i rate the novel around 8/10, I just hope its not going to get repetitive latter. Ty
same here, I have started learning Japanese in duolingo, next would be Korean.
tried Chinese too but it was too hard...
Jp authors tend to plot their novels on huge misundertandings + setting up for harems. I dont get it. Its like super naive mc's aren't annoying enough.
I recommend "The First Order," enjoyable to read it I remember correctly.
Yeah read till ch 9 and took out from my libary it aint for me, but still can see why ppl like it, it gives wholesome vibes plus MC is literal tsundere