This reads very much like a screenplay. I'd like to see author expands and add more than actions and dialogues. Plot is intriguing and characters are interesting enough. The battle scene is exciting. Epic, I dare say. The story's got a huge potential. So, a bit more muscle on the bone, and this would rake in stars and readers.
I love the novel with the various characters and so on. The one thing I hate is that there is too many POV's, tend to forget minor characters unless to will be relevant to the plot. Some minor characters reappearing and that messes my flow.
When i first start reading this book i didn't expect this kind of quality of story. then on new year, i buy subscribe on patreon, and read it all in one day) after 305 chapters i can only say that it still one of the best books that i read.
Bro this shot is fire you got me hyped up for the next chapters I can’ wait for them cuz it’s so fucking good and if you plan on making it a manga then you gonna have me busting nuts while reading
Video games isn't my cup of tea but this story seems hella interesting! The concept seems unique and world building is pretty nice to.Synopsis is a great opening and it attract you to read the story and to find out about this unique universe.Great job!
This novel has a ton of potential but sadly is held back by a ton of grammar issues that makes it look like it was translated by a machine. If the novel was rewritten with proper grammar and some of the sentences were revised to flow more easily then this would be a 5 star book. Another problem is that dialogue comes in the middle of paragraphs and is not separated when different people start talking making it hard to follow. The sex scenes are terrible and impossible to understand while having an unnecessary amount of cussing.
Henyee translations!! I Beg you >.
It was an okay read.But its kinda below average for a zombie novel. There is no sense of tension or fear when reading this and instead of putting up a frightening scene or atmosphere, the author decided to push some info dumps in your throat. It was okay if the info dumps was original but the it was the big baddie government and the failed experiment virus.When setting up a zombie novel the author should have put some tension like show the victims its impact to the world and stuff. They were only mentioned but it relied on just telling aspect which was kinda underwhelming in my opinion.
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Honestly grammar is pretty bad, and could use better spacing, but overall it's pretty good. I would recommend this only if you're bored because it's kinda cliche tho.
Honestly when it almost reach ending and the author decided to makes them wait for a week before doing the ritual with the ex-fiancé knowing the secret I am pissed off.But turn out that there is a reason for that (to makes sure that our dear hero-to-be did not choose to be normal human huh, ok got it, that is a solid reason) so well ok, still bad decision though. Anyway, I like the story, the gore is not that much and the romance is solid. So here, takes this 5* from me
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