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Hey, MercyCrown!
Is there going to be Aliya's or Elijah's story?
I feel there is more to their stories and I believe you were planning to do that...
your book is amazing author can't wait for more updates
The cover doesn't reveal all the intriguing aspects of the story. To clarify, FL, a character who is part sparrow and beast, takes on the role of the ML's tutor, despite being an adult. The ML possesses a tragic backstory, being both blind and suffering from a curse that turns them into a beast form. What stands out is FL's compelling reason for getting involved with the ML, despite the grim circumstances.
The dynamics between FL, the ML, and their siblings are endearing, with a focus on the ML's journey adapting to blindness. The author skillfully explores topics such as braille, which adds a delightful touch and showcases commendable representation of disabilities. So far, the portrayal is excellent.
Additionally, the translator, Bee, is doing an outstanding job, ensuring that the story's charm is effectively conveyed in English.
Our protagonist finds herself trapped within a game, tasked with winning over seven targets (plus one) while navigating their intense feelings of possessiveness, which can lead to her character being "blackened." Having already experienced failure 999 times, she has emotionally distanced herself from the game, almost feeling detached or numb.
Throughout her journey, we primarily follow her "white lotus" persona, and her experiences have unexpectedly resonated with me on a deeper level.每当她伤心,我也会跟着哭泣。偶尔,她会嘲笑别人对她的误解,那时我的内心总会隐隐作痛。
欺骗他人虽然有些安慰,因为这些人过去都曾伤害过她,包括那个看似温柔体贴但在第一章就让她丧命的家伙(尽管我暂时忘记了这一段,现在感到有些愧疚)。看着她在他们之间周旋,预测他们的反应,确实带来了一些报复的满足感。
唯一让我遗憾的是,小说中缺少了snusnu(可能是角色名字或情节线索)以及亲密互动。最接近的一幕是:
剧透
当她帮助药物昏迷的FL进入酒店房间时,遭遇了一场"袭击",但作者没有详细描述,只是匆匆带过一句简单的问候和告别。
关于结局(不剧透),它留下了许多未解之谜,虽然不算糟糕,但解释得不够清楚。感觉作者可能在匆忙结尾时,忽略了原本构思的一些内容。
总的来说,我还是非常喜欢这部小说,阅读过程十分愉快。
Ah you gave me 2 new ones. Much appreciated. Looking forward to meeting again compatriot
I was surprised to find a novel that exhibited such insensitivity and racism. The author consistently portrayed dark-skinned women as inferior and unattractive in comparison to the fair-skinned FL, especially in scenes where Er Ya, the FL's rival, encounters her. When Er Ya first meets the FL, the author emphasizes her jealousy and self-consciousness due to her darker complexion. There's also an instance where the ML introduces Er Ya to his mother, which highlights the issue:
Duan Xinghui's mother, Madame Duan, hadn't fully recovered from the joy of learning her son was safe when she nearly fainted upon hearing he intended to marry Er Ya. Upon seeing Er Ya, dressed in simple cotton clothes and seemingly unfamiliar with proper etiquette, Madame Duan's initial excitement turned to shock.
(...)
This village girl's background left her questioning. Despite her inner anger, Madame Duan maintained a forced smile on the surface. Duan Xinghui, noticing his mother's smile, softened his usual stern demeanor and reassured her, saying, "Mom, Er Ya is a lovely lady. She's innocent and charming, and she'll surely be very filial to you."
However, Madame Duan couldn't help but feel uncomfortable with his description. "Innocent and charming"? To her eyes, Er Ya appeared older than her son due to her dark skin tone. As someone who identifies as a person of color, I厌恶这种对肤色的持续贬低,它与一个人是否是"白莲花"无关。作者频繁批评这一点,我感到非常不满。
I myself enjoyed " lord of the world: I became lord of the desert from the start "
Yes stop this and read the actual translation its way better
Thanks appreciate it
I miss Wu Hong . When is our Empress coming back
The protagonist are m#der by me
