It’s a very promising book, but so far it’s just telling what happened, I.e. no direct speech, no idea how fl feels and no plot twists yet. All we know is that her business is expanding. I hope we’ll get to have more insight into the fl and the people around her
Hello, honest review. The concept and plot is good, as well as the power systems, and the world building is great, but there is one only problem..... the language you used is not easy to understand. Well i understand it pretty well, but if you want to reach the heart of many people, you can use simpler terms in your narration.
Is there a better way to put my feelings on these reviews without seeming like I am sucking up? Anyways the picture of the cover attracted me then the awesome synopsis which is a delight to see a proper detail of what to expect. I am happy to take part in something that is addictive and great! I already felt so welcomed to the page to go further! Bastian comes off like an interesting guy so I hope to partake in his existence and see where this goes! ^^
get full Stars from me because it deserves it, In the beginning the FL is a bit naive and seems to be really young in her way of thinking but i like it in some way because her growth is great in the story, the other main characters are well done too and the story is nice to read so 5/5
interesting synopsis might be a good read
Plot: ★★★★★ (5 stars)Update stability: ★★★★★ (5 stars)Main character: ★★★ (3 stars)Side characters and character development: ★★★★★ (5 stars)World-building: ★★★★★ (5 stars) Keep going author , one of the best novels that i ve ever read deserve 4.8 or 4.7.Please just be sure to keep the quality like that and dont update so fast and rune your novel .
now comes the rating since i finished the current novels the story power system is creative and thats what i like about novels new concepts something to draw your interest to keep you reading
Hoping the romantic relationship takes off soon!!
??????????? scifi scifi scifi. Loving the story author. A refreshing piece of art. Aliens, spaceships and above all a familiar country there??? good wek
chapter 10????????????what motive is there to continue?
Fun read. have its flaw but its ok so far. I hope its get better.
The security guard answer with his big full smile, you wouldn't know how wide the smile was, because the securityman was BigMouth race, his mouth was even in same size of our body.