DaoistWOaHR7
Wow~ I did not think that i would find this hidden gem here. I like the story and the pace with which the story progressed so far. A very good work auther~ Keep going~
This novel is really good, the story is captivating right from the start. the Main character has a good background and not your typical past that MC was abandoned by his parents or is an orphan because his parents died in a car accident, the writing quality has a few grammatical mistakes, but of course, considering the author is new it's no problem. the story binds you from the first chapter only. I am really excited about him getting strong and taking revenge on those mother fu**ers in the future .Am definitely waiting for more chapters.
while I really enjoy rushed storys this is on another lvl. it's to the point that it starts to be kind of random also....wth are ****** THESEE FOR you put them every 10 sec in the text
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Very very nice story. It's a little bit dramatic but entertaining. I wish there are more fighting episodes. Aiden should also learn martial arts so he can defend himself. It would be nice if the boy lead character is stronger. Thank you.
Good book interesting, without any cheats that make the person succeed in everything they do........................................................
Cool book, there are just some small writing errors but overall, it's good. Good luck author. Waiting for more chapters............................................
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Am I the only one here still occasionally visiting this page hoping for a new chapter ??This novel has a unique air about it that I won't be able to find in other novels. Translator-san, please continue this work, cause I will wait for it. ?
Insanely fun read. I love the source material (Hikaru no Go and League of Legends), and the characters are like ale and engaging. Story is well-paced, keeps you interested. I’m pumped to see where it’s going!
Now I've read up to chapter 61. The novel is good, writing is extremely easy to just flow through the lost chapters in the story. But it started to get a little repetitive, or maybe I'm the only one who's tired after reading 61 chapters in a row. but overall it's a good read.
I said I would write a review after chapter 10 I think....... anyhowSo far the quality of the story is on par with the first theme I feel the author is trying to say, according to the title, it is very pride crushing for the Mc in some sense.I haven't seen many flaws in the writing, but I wasn't looking for them so their not noticeable. Same goes with the Stability of the updates though it's still early on, the updates are good.The world background isn't something I can say much about since there isn't really any development yet in this part aside from the very very basics.The character designs? Well so far the two main ones seem to be a comedy gig, but I do hope they develop more, more characters with more personality around the Mc to give it a good flow, but as for now it's okay since it's early on.This being said.... I am not good at English, thus my pick on the Writing Quality and flaws will be low, too me as long as it reads smoothly I am fine with it. This story though always gets a laugh at the misfortune the mc goes through. I will update my Review after chapter 20 if some of the qualities of the story change. I would recommend giving it a read.
