Kamala_Nadhia
Love the development, the MC and the story hope you bring out more[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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honestly not that great wish they would stop putting this in the free to read so often it's like ehh why not that enjoyable and not that interesting story can be nice or drawn out or completely off the topic of the subject
I feel that this type of leveling system is really interesting. The subtle way that the author shows how the Mc living in a skill system world without too much distractment, it was only during the sleeping period that the system updates. Very interesting.
So far up until chapter 70+ while he is starting in the academy the story seems interesting. The concept is quite good yet I have a few concerns.
The fact that this was reincarnation after being regarded as a "Grandmaster scholar" of some sort you would think that he should have the knowledge needed to exceed every one. The fact that he became like that before reincarnation should entail that he should have at least the ability to increase his white core among other things. Frankly, his having the knowledge of the past even as a "Grandmaster scholar" shows no particular big advantage to him and to the story. With his knowledge of the past he should have exceeded every kid in the academy but it was basically not the case in the story. I see no point of him being that "grandmaster scholar" in his previous life since the story would be no different if he was a simple scholar. Another one is the pattern of the story. To be honest, it was quite predictable. Its full of a sort of down path (the challenges for the MC) when in a good story it goes like rise before going down. In here, he basically experience continous challenges that seems too annoying since the world doesnt work that way no matter how fictional it may be there will always be a "good or awesome even or encounter" so to speak.
unreadable, translator cany even bother to double check and just copy and pastes. waste of time
Too much plot armor. Power scaling is lacking. Mc' character is agreeable.Update is good.World Background is lacking maybe this is early chapters.
Good start it the it's just unreadable later on and it makes u pay for itSo I would just not. Read it ..,.................................
Great story so far! Love the intelligent MC who’s actually written in an intelligent way! Great fun, and plenty of Easter eggs during the auction.
Love the story development and I can see the writer has a set plot for the story. This is good.
disclaimer i suck at writing reviews and similar stuff:it's a fantastic novel and you'll be in for a fun ride that is definitely different from all the generic and often bad novels on webnovel. also as a proofreader I've seen quite a lot of chapters in advance and can say for sure that it stays consistently good throughout and there's much good stuff to come.
This novel isn't for me. The MC is stupid with no common sense with a focus on getting revenge. Like every other paragraph MC will say something about revenge. Then every other paragraph MC will talk about why MC didn't get a army or some OP ability for free with no effort when in real life any normal person would not even think about get an army or whatever OP from the start an just be grateful with what they got. I really don't know how this got many 5 star reviews. Though the writing quality is great, while there are many chapters which are long enough to my liking. Still I can't read this anymore.
