Wonderful storyline. Give me goosebumps whenever read a new chapter. But dear author you need to be a bit fast in updating the story. We readers eagerly wait for each episode
I love it so far just I hope you don’t make the protagonist always tried to hide his abilities like most other novels it’s kinda annoying and old doing that... (hide abilities and act like a scary cat... young master shows up .... face snaking time the hides and repeats a thousand times ) Lol I hope you make him a a genius that is more open about it but so far I like this novel keep up the good work! :)
I love this book
it's very fun read and writing with ease and perfection in a way that's not complex to understand.
Good writing qualities too
Thanks for sharing author.
Great quality of writing. very accurate and technically proficient. Graphic violent combat that gets the blood pumping fast!
story is ok, but the characters are a bit flat. hopefully that will improve as the series continues!
I love it,the worldbuilding and character development is pretty great.Hope you won't drop this story,as I'm invested into reading it
I hate it when people mess up English because it's so annoying, but the author steadily keeps improving, and the story is absolutely amazing. Keep up the good work!
UNDERATED- Overall rating 4.8/5 (I'm lenient when I review)
SHORT CRITICAL REVIEW- Read 118 chapters
As of the time I'm writing this, it's been 4 months. The amount of recognition this work is getting is pitifully low for what it deserves. It's a solid read for webnovel standards. The story develops quite nicely and besides the beginning which is a little slow, the pacing is good. There are many interesting ideas in the novel and the author does well to execute them. Many novels on here have interesting ideas, but the execution tends to fail. Here, it's quite clear and well explained.
I'm not really sure why this novel isn't popular. Perhaps its because some people think its similar to Supremacy Games? (I haven't read that so I can't comment) Maybe it's the little slow start?
The other point I could think of would be characters. Personally, I am pleased with the MC of this story. Kind, Silly, Misfortunate, kind of a gag character because of his gambling addiction, Naïve (which he grows out of), perhaps these traits shove away people expecting a ruthless, cold, selfish, anti-hero-like character, pragmatic character, survival of the fittest because the story is a survival game which people expect. It's a shame. It's refreshing to have a more morally good character in such a story. The Mc is very close to his family and has shared his secrets with them (Father and little Sister), which I suppose some people don't like because it's 'Stupid'. Yes yes indeed but not every mc can hold such burdens or secrets within their heart. The MC here actually feels much more human.
I've also noticed that some people don't like the Little Sister, but personally I quite like her. Brocon aside, having seen many characters like her in other works, she is much much more on the likable side. She can be seen as annoying, clingy, but readers fail to see that its a very close brotherly and sister relationship. She is executed well.
I hope people are more willing to give this novel a shot. It really deserves better.
Shipping wise, it is intended to be 3 potential love interests. 118 chapters in, there's only been 1 that has been having the screen time. The other 2 are up in the air in regards to if they have appeared or not. I am looking forward to it. Hopefully I get some romantic drama with 1 heroine winning at the end.
Due to my previously bad experiences with Webnovel reviews, I was hesitant getting into this one where everyone was praising it, but wow, this novel deserves every bit of that praise. The worldbuilding is amazing, power system took a bit of reference from LOTM but still remains very original, and the plot hints at very interesting developments to come. Great job so far author and I hope you can keep it up till this becomes a big thing on Webnovel. Your work is too good to be less popular than some of the garbage on this app.
Why do translations always get bad after chapter 40 in novels like these? The story is so good its a pity its ruined by such machine like translation do the translators only get paid for the first 40 chapters??? Pls edit the story i dont want drop it.
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This novel is very interesting. The main character truly loves studying and spends most of his time doing it. Unlike the typical MCs who get system cheat and want to chase women they couldn't before, status etc. He doesnt care about that, the system boosts his desires and he still has to work hard. The side characters are also not very bland however the story is very slow paced which some might not like the slow development. He is not nowhere close to the college exams. Give it a try.
Definitely a new thought