Haven't read it yet but I will now, I just want to say this here.... MC's background is similar to mine except the last 2...... 1. I don't live in an apartment, but my dad's house (May he rest in peace) And 2. I haven't had a girlfriend since I was 24 (I'm going 34)
It started off cool but the power scaling and lacking of inconsistency is bad. Also, the Mc’s development is pretty bad as well. and even though farming is in the title … I guess it’s more about farming creatures and people. Take a pass if I were you.
The concept is great. But the story flow is so incoherent and random that you have no idea what is happening.
Mc mining ores in a cave, devil girl drops onto his front. Mc running away, stuck in ground 10 feet under. It's so abrupt and random, no transition or explanation.
Half the story mc is talking in his lalaland and readers have to make guesswork all the time what is happening. Is this the flashback or was it happening to mc now?
So, in summary, it's confusing and the author is mostly talking to himself about the key points of the story. It is missing a lot of context and the transitions are not there.
i quite liked this novel................
Well I don't know it may be that I didn't read it carefully but from the sinopsys he is a 16 year old .and based on the few chapters that I read I think he's retarded completely maybe i didn't read it carefully I'm saying again why ?well it's obviously his behavior
this just a copied version of a similar novel I read a frew months back(MTL) and as always it's a trashy copy made by a writer how just wanted to milk some views but his skills were way below the original hence like all others he increased the cheat(to hide his BS,plot holes,plot Armour etc) as
the more op a cheat easier to write hence lower the skills of the writer
read the original the cheat actually makes mc weaker than others at the starting and then it takes mc time to discover how it works as the story advances , functions features charging etc
Raw?
Nice one
This novel is one of the best I have ever read…. It gives the perfect balance bettween gameworld and real world both being interesting on their own with there own unique background that I enjoy. When talking abt real world and if he can get stronger or powerful in it….. Yes. Even if that part was slightly confusing to find out or not explained as much so far. It is well worth it. And this game world seems to be more than just a game with the subtle hints…. Makes this story even more interesting since everything can mean more than what an already great world and story than it already is. So even if the game world isn’t more than what it seems it is still a great read overall.
Author thanks for making a great story! Please keep uploading.
the more I read the less I know
too many thing remain untold and it's quite annoying to read ahead without knowing them
courtesy of taking a mystery genre too seriously
also it has awkward dialogs(clearly english isn't author's first language)
and it seems to be a rookie author too
but all in all it has potential
Hello, the author here
Okay, this would be my first review after careful consideration, since this is my second work.
First of all, I would like to thank both my old and new readers, for the support and feedback that you give me.
I plan to write a long story base on a cat and a vampire combined along with a system and to review it slowly as I write to correct any grammatical mistakes, I might subconsciously leave behind.
For now, I will continue to keep up with a daily update of my novel, so I hope to get more feedback from you all in the future.
We are at 50 collections, yuhuu! Anyway, are you enjoying the story so far? If yes, please let me know with, Idk, a review or even a comment or by voting; I'd love to hear your opinion :)